it needs another sequel. cuz…I'M IN LOVE WITH IT! please! i need MORE! :D

YOU FINALLY UPDATED!

I am so happy; when I realised you put up this chapter I was squealing! I love your stories!

If you do end up writing a sequel, I am SO there to read it!

Hope you do!

Toodles and Love

Oky Verlo

After reading the first story I had to read this one! I like how their powers evolved over the years. And I also liked the creative story line and characters. Nice job! I'll be keeping my eye open for a third one.

And here was I, all set to start squealing like a five year old because I thought you had properly updated.

Oh well, squealing for legal drug/drug and drop, will have to do.

!

Toodles and Love

Oky Verlo

You evil little b****!

You brought back Sato!

AND YOU ENDED IT ON A CLIFFY!

Never the less, I love the chappie and am waiting in extreme h appiness for the next one which I hope will be soon . Can't help b ut wanting to pressure a brilliant writer! XD

Toodles and Love

Oky Verlo

OMG! An update! *jumps up and down several times*

And omg what's going to happen?

It was an awesome chapter and I hope you update a little sooner this time xD (though if you take as long I won't mind as long as it's a chapter as good as this one ;))

AAAAAAAWWWWWWW! i wants to read what happens next!

Please update soon! (the prequel rocked too!)

Toodles and Love

Oky Verlo

I love this story! You have to finish it! Don't leave us hanging...

omg csn't wait to read the next chapter!i loved this story its so interesting :D please the next chapter soon thank you

I read the first story you wrote and loved it

this sequel looks like it will be just as good

cant wait to see what happens

keep writing

love it

I commands you to update this story of pure awesomes NOW!

Seriously, this story rocks and i can't wait to see ... read what happens next.

So ... ... ... please update?

Toodles and Love

Oky Verlo

When will you update? I really WANT to read the rest!

nonononononono i cant read this right now its too sad

Again, so good! (And NO FOOTNOTES! :D YAY!) The only thing I guess was weird was Kei is so unlike herself from your last fic. I like Rikuou being pissed with Rei getting into his thoughts. XD Can't wait for more!

Okay, while I loved it... The scene where the baddies come in, take Kazahaya, he goes with it, wipes memories... It seemed really lickedy split quick, you know? It was a powerful scene cut a little short, it seemed. Still really good, but the pacing seemed off.

But I still love it. I hope you don't mind me nitpicking. (And watch out for typos still! There are a lot of sounds-the-same-but-spelled-differently words. Such as stalking and stocking. If Rikuou still stalks shelves I'll be amused. He has weird tastes. ;3 I think I've offered before but if you'd ever like your work beta-read I'd be happy to. :)

I love your story ideas; they're nice and original. _ I'm so happy you write them!