I want to be able to write like you you're soooo good. Keep Writing!

Interesting, but as to what i can remember from the show he didn't seem like he would that way, but then again who know's. But for a person who dosen't normally read these type of fics, you did a good job of writing one.

Oh wow, that was amazing. It had depth and emotion and honesty and I loved the part about it seeming like the eyes were talking to him... kind of freaky...

Try not to repeat words. They may have been for emphasis, but after a while 'small' lost its emphasis. Otherwise, well written.

What a profound story. Very disturbing, but the words "Lucas" and "disturbing" go so well together sometimes (can you tell i'm an ELF? hehe). I hope to see a sequal (hint, hint). I would love to see where this goes.

Wow. Very good work. I especially liked the section where the mirror image is talking - its scary in a freaky way. I could feel the desperation and self-loathing and it left me wanting more.

I would like to see this continue. I think the aftermath and the healing would be a nice way to finish this.

Oh my god, that was sad.

I am never ceased to be impressed with your writing. This story, in particular, has some incredible depth and extrememly strong imagery. The ending leaves room for a continuation, but it is still something that can stand on its own. Very good work, and I am eagerly looking forward to your next fic.