This is soo good!

Hope Hoshi doesn't get hurt!

Update Soon!

You must please continue, the plot line has definately bitten me

I really enjoy the flow of your stories, but the formatting is all pushed the left hand side of the screen.

i did not get the end, too.

its a very good story, very intense and i like the last tiwst about eddie...

Would be great if you would finish the story *hint hint*

sue

This is so good!

This is so cute, write more.

That was really good, but I didn't get the end;

With sweat still glistening on his pectorals, Malcolm Reed,

draped a towel around his neck, picked up his dataPADD and began

recording.

ter herself, and

Wyse won't hurt her. Because damn it, if he does, he'll be

answering to me-me and a torpedo with his name on it.

End log.

I'm either stupid or it didn't post right. You haven't updated in a while, and I hope that you are al least planning on ending the ptory and not keeping us all hanging. Please!

Erin

Really good and very interessting! Please continue! Like, soon!

Wicked. Very kewl.

I enjoyed the story and would like to see the conclusion

Please contineu soon! I enjoyed reading this fic! P Good job

dying to find out what happens come up with another chapter soon.

I'm impressed. I'm a big Enterprise fan and it takes a really good story to impress me. I love the dialog. "Bloody Hell" that sounds just like him. Please Keep Writing.

That was grate you shold keep writing.

Carry on, BUT don't get Reed in troble.

great really really good! wonderful explanation about why malcolm is like he is i liked it a lot!

please please write more!