Dude. Definitely write more stuff. I really like your style. keep writing.

very interesting

whyd he have to diss ratguts?

their my favorite units

but anyho keep it up also can you please tell me what he thinks of all the other drowning doom units?

i wanna see what he thinks of the lightning rod

Not bad. Hope Jason gets out of his emoness.

Not bad.

Very good, great wording, I'm not so good with reviews but I do love to read and this has caught my interest entirely, hope theres more

An interesting and novel piece you've put together here! Good choice of words, and it all carries the solid feel of the game without ignoring uniqueness entirely. This definitely wasn't rushed or haphazardly tossed together. No, this is well thought out and gives readers a new point of view to see the events of the game through. Well done!