Nice fic - pleasingly full of crack.

Hope you return to it one of these days.

aww no more?

why no more from sage of toads

Baah.

Okay, it was funny, in a ridiculous and outrageous way, but there were hefty misspellings. Since it is a parody I can't say a lot on the characters, but you at least tried to reason their changed behaviour. That's good.

However, some parts simply don't add up - Ai's martial prowess, for instance. If she had a near-rape experience, mention her taking martial arts classes or something, since I at least can only suspend my disbelief only so much until it all comes crashing down and becomes boring.

Just reread this great story.

A pleasure and fascinating to read.

Really hope it will be continued some day.

Thank you for writing.

You're a goddamn maniac Talon. A MANIAC.

I can't wait for the next update for this.

Keep up the great work.

Great fic! I deeply enjoyed it. A pity that it appears to be dead. Or, is it, oh mighty author?

Uhhh... The insanity of it all... I need... More. Moaaaaare! Update! Puh-lease! I just can't wait to read the chaos that would be unleased upon the clash of the Second and the Third Child! Argh! I updates are my drug!

This is... INTERESTING.

I'm disgusted, scared, laughing, disturbed, shaking, and strangely aroused.

crackiest cracky crack every cracked.

This was a pretty good change to the Evangelion universe. I hope you decide to continue it one day.

That was absolutely, incredibly awesome! I'm not normally a fan of Eva fan-fics but your summary intrigued me as I looked through the list of fics you have written. (Had just read a Harry Potter one.)

Overall? I'm liking it. Admittedly Chapter 11 was a bit more than this Old Bat could handle. The previous chapters, as well as Chapter 12, did NOT cause me to lose my dinner. Literally.

Hopefully, this story will soon be continued at some point. ::chuckles:: Good things might come to those who wait, but I AM an Old Bat, you see.

Take care and thanks to your and your friend for sharing.

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!

Blood test strips for the Glucometer Throne!

::coughcoughcoubhcough::

My G-d. The sheer, unrelenting insanity. I LOVE IT.

Oh God, NGE has gone of the rails in such a spectacular and bloody fashion hasn't it? Though I have to say that so far, despite the blood and gore of the Contingency, it's been a pretty badass story so far, and it only promises to get better, especially if Mari, with her very unique Eva, decides that she likes Shinji's Scenario better than the Old Geezer's in charge of SELEE's. Though what I'm really looking forward to when Shinji & Kaworu duke it out. I bet it will be pretty epic.