Wonderful!...please tell me you've written a sequal?

::sigh:: perfect example of denial. Not that I don't do it myself... but... anyways this was a great poem. Poor Lina... she must be heartbroken. I really liked it.
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How sad...you should really write another chapter...

I like it. I'm content with saying that!

WWAAAAAAAAHHHHH! Not fair! She deserves him dammit! Very good though...this really does sound like her...

Good story! You really show Lina as how stubborn she is!

WAAAAAAAAHHHHH! *sniffle* Poor lina!

Well written and a good ending (is "shared my hotel room" insinuating anything?

This is sad. Poor Lina. You can really feel for her in this. Can we say "Denial"?

Awesome! really deep and angsty. Reminds me of the poem from "10 things I hate about you" *****(5 stars)

-Annie Seillune

poor Lina-chan ;_; all alone in the dark cruel world...no that seriously was sad especially the whole "half a person" part that was really good! even though I think Lina should get Gourry-kun! _ ;_; then Syphiel would be all alone...OH CRUEL WORLD WHY MUST YOU TORMENT US SOOOOO?

That was really really pretty, and seemed to capture Lina really well... *bursts into tears* It's so ahrd to find good Lina/Gourry fics!

*sniff* Denial is a powerful thing, isn't it?

very very beautiful, gotta admit I got a bit teary near the end. _

's sad! mmmm..yesterday's gravy...*drool* Just kidding. ;) Hummm...Don't think I could ever really picture Gourry thinking of Sylphiel as prettier then Lina, though. Lina seems to have a more 'vibrant' beauty. n.n

good, very sad. very lina. not like anything i've ever read by you before