"Save costs?" Platinum would have complained about it being a "hole in the wall" & reserved everyone luxury suites, being a billionair's daughter & all.

THE ENDING XD
WIN

Hahaha, omigod, fluff and humor!?
This is too awesome. Keep it up!

I find this story related to the ones in Deviant Art. But never mind that.

My comment on this story is funny because Pearl is playing Platinum's feelings on Diamond. On the romantic side, Diamond's confession is slightly straight forward but meaningful to Platinum and it's sweet as candy.

HAHA! HALARIOUS! I love the ending!

hey um im a anoymous reviewer and like i know that silver and blue arent siblings wait what?

ROFLMFAO they never expected that.

and why can't you call them Heart and Soul. trust dude it sounds way better.

P.S. i know your not a dude but whatever

Write more! Write more! Write more! And don't listen to that dumbass Farla. This is col.

Pretty good. It felt a little rushed, especially the dialogue. The description could've been better, but I'm not really a stickler for that kind of thing. Overall, a very satisfying read. Loved how the ending went. :D

i suggest you reread the manga because blue and silver are not brother and sister they were both kidnapped by the masked man. blues parents were shown in the firered/leafgreen arc. silvers dad was giovvanni

You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. Similar reasoning should be applied to terms like trainer, types like electric, moves like thundershock, items like pokeballs and undertakings like journey.

Do not make up a name for putting two of your OCs together. It's ridiculous and pointless.

"The two newest Dex holders are Faro HeartGold and Star SoulSilver "

Those are absurd names even for the pokemon category. Also, seriously, stop with the random capitalization. The fact it's a game title doesn't mean you can capitalize a letter in the middle of a surname like that.

"CommonerShipping! That gets an automatic gold star in my book."

Quoting you, but the sentiment is the same. Well done sir, I tip my cap to you. As far as I am into the DP arc, characters are fine. Oh, and bonus points for Pearl getting smacked, regardless of why.

Any chance of sending me a link to the RP, so I can read it?