|Reviews for Pull Down the Moon|
| LiquidAltar 9/9/10 . chapter 1
I like this quite a bit. Props, first off, for not writing some pointless Mary Sue just for fanservice. I love how you started and ended it with "We would fall like angels".
I also love the contrast between these two lines:
"I fell into myself, vacated myself of any and all emotions. I slid my arm around his neck, tilting his head back. Somehow, somehow, I was strong enough. Stronger than him. I thought that maybe it was because I was being fueled by my love, whereas he was only propelled by hate. And love was so much stronger.
Then I closed my eyes, and I forced the blade into his head, and I had never done anything so hard."
You've done a good job illustrating that even though it might not have been difficult for him to do, it was sure as hell harder than anything else he'd ever done. Nice work.