|Reviews for Elements We call Love|
| Lucyole 6/20/12 . chapter 6
very interesting story and poor bella damn
you to hell terra you are so annoying just
go some where else bitch i voting for bella and
B-B they are very cute as an pairing slade and raven
are the best overall i love em together.
the story si really good written, amazing funny and
sweet please write more i would be happy to read
the next chapter asap
| Royalraven007 8/12/10 . chapter 4
I am glad that you are putting school first Shadow but I do hope that you find time to finish this story. If I can make a suggestion, say who is talking and space it out a bit more. Your story is really hard to keep track of who is doing what and who is talking. I'll still read though cuz I love Slade and you made him sound so hot in this story also I love the idea of him having a sister :) good luck with life and writing!
| Royalraven007 8/12/10 . chapter 2
Good story but you need to work on your grammer and flow of the story, right now it is kinda choppy :)
| fallfromreality 12/10/09 . chapter 2
Very creative story! I love the idea of slade and RAven having siblings and Slade joining the TT