very interesting story and poor bella damn

you to hell terra you are so annoying just

go some where else bitch i voting for bella and

B-B they are very cute as an pairing slade and raven

are the best overall i love em together.

the story si really good written, amazing funny and

sweet please write more i would be happy to read

the next chapter asap

I am glad that you are putting school first Shadow but I do hope that you find time to finish this story. If I can make a suggestion, say who is talking and space it out a bit more. Your story is really hard to keep track of who is doing what and who is talking. I'll still read though cuz I love Slade and you made him sound so hot in this story also I love the idea of him having a sister :) good luck with life and writing!

Good story but you need to work on your grammer and flow of the story, right now it is kinda choppy :)

Very creative story! I love the idea of slade and RAven having siblings and Slade joining the TT