You could continue this story, it could be a good one I think! Great start or chapter! I hope to read more of it!
Stardust is a great story and this is a great continuation!

My deepest compliments on your story

please keep developing this story! i really like this idea and i think that it will make a really good story 3 i really like it so far!

I. HACKIN'. LOVED. THAT. MOVIE! Update soon

Why don't you continue? :(

different... i like it though (:

Update please!

Totally awsome! I loved it and i really hope you continue it. I'll be waiting!

I do have one small comment: I doubt that Yvaine would faint when she heard. Yes, she is in love with Tristan, but i think that her character is a bit stronger than that.

Other than that small note i absolutely loved it!

I love it, why did you stop writing it? I want to know what happens, please carry on, please! Or i'll die!

OMG! sooo good! r u going to update soon? please do! that was excellent! !

Hey, why did you stop writing this story? It loks likeit could be very good!

Very interesting! Give me a bit more detail, and keep writing! :D

ok ur reading list:

the host

neverwhere

and anything else i wil send 2 u

francisco!

omg ur so good! when ur a millionare u will support me.

wow. seriously u. r. so. good.

luh ya!