WOW! im impressed! i dont usually read anythign other than Tasuki, CHichiri, or nuriko fics but this one was GOOD! you HAVE to keep writing!

This is a beautiful, amazingly-well-written piece of work. Mitsukake is so often brushed over as just the big healing guy with the stern face, but you've captured something here that is both true and faithful to the character, as well as being stunningly beautiful as well. I'm very impressed. :)

That was really good, and well written. You must have put a lot of thought into it...