is this the end or there's still more?
if there is, i hope you'd update it soon...

This was actually the best possible ending. No "happy ever afters" or out of character characters prancing around. It's absolutely brilliant!

~ Tuppence ~

It's such a ... final ending. It was very well written. I really liked it. Can't wait to read the final installment.

~ Tuppence ~

Ah, if only it were that simple. I'm guessing you're done asking for some help? Can't wait to finish reading the rest of the story.

~ Tuppence ~

Oh this is such a promising point. I can't wait to see the show-down (although I admit to a desire to see both live at the end of it all!).

~ Tuppence ~

Oh brilliant chapter. Would love to read the rest but really need to sleep now. I loved how Faye managed to back talk to Vicious. The girl has balls - you gotta hand it to her!

~ Tuppence ~

Aha the comparison of Faye to Ein...that was truly inspired!! Faye really *wouldn't* like the comparison, would she?

Can't wait to read the rest, but it's the middle of the ngiht now. I'm off to bed.

~ Tuppence ~

Oh what an absolutely brilliant chapter. I love how Vicious was surprised by how many men Faye managed to take out. Go her!

~ Tuppence ~

Oh the suspense is impressive. It's really getting to me.

~ Tuppence ~

OH man, gore fest. Just the way Spike would really have done it. Brilliantly written!!

~ Tuppence ~

Oh man. Wouldn't want to be Spike now...although the night might have been totally worth it.

Can't wait to read the rest. :)

~ Tuppence ~

Ah frickin' heck! This whole suspense thing is so over-rated; when will people learn that people like prompt, unexciting, instant happy endings. :(

~ Tuppence ~

Oh brilliantly promising. Your characterisation has been extremely well done. Can't wait to read the rest.

~ Tuppence ~

Another great line to end the chapter. Loved it.

~ Tuppence ~

Oh poor Faye. Her reaction was understandable. Very understandable.

~ Tuppence ~