|Reviews for Going into Shock|
| my 2 guys 1/1/13 . chapter 5
that was good keep it up
| janosch73 6/17/12 . chapter 5
| 7 Ace 11/8/11 . chapter 3
What the hell? Jake's jealous?
Jasper pleasured himself thinking about Bella and Edward? . WOW...
HAHA Jacob/Bella/Edward ...*shakes thoughts away* *not working, melts*
HAHA telling Charlie will be hilarious!
How will Carlisle and Esme react to the two three-person relationships?
| 7 Ace 11/8/11 . chapter 2
Bella is definitely taking this well...hell, who wouldn't? Married to a hot vampire and then another one joining you? Damn...she's lucky.
| 4CullensandaBlack 3/19/11 . chapter 4
hot hot hot
| Deanne Marie Cullen 2/5/11 . chapter 5
I am in absolute awe of your work! thank you so much for sharing your talent with me/us!
| chavamirjam 1/21/11 . chapter 4
Whoa, at first I thought Charlie was given a little TMI, but didn't see that twist coming... The flashback also nicely summarizes their feelings. Great!
Don't know why you say in the summary there's no plot, I think there is
| chavamirjam 1/21/11 . chapter 3
Very nice :)
I like Jasper as a sub and I enjoyed reading with their vocality and all!
And don't get me wrong, I liked all of chapter 1 as well! (And 2)
| chavamirjam 1/20/11 . chapter 1
Finally I made it to start the Going into Shock series (remember, I was a bit thick to get the order right, we exchanged a few PMs).
I've only read the prequel, will save the rest for tomorrow.
Found it very hot, very sexy :) Didn't expect Jasper to be so sensitive though, I thought he would've approved and had you turn it into a foursome ;)
On a less sex-crazed level, I found the twists in relationships you did intriguing.
Tiny criticism: the second lemon seemed a little repetitive in choice of words.
And two logical mistakes, I think cos I had to re-read to understand: the last sentence in the last paragraph (Jasper...) and in the third last paragraph,last sentence I guess it should say "I run off..." instead of "she runs off...".
I hope I do not appear over-picky, it's just now at the end I stumbled over these sentences.
Will continue tomorrow!
| KareBear1965 1/2/11 . chapter 4
I loved it...
| mikkimousie 11/2/10 . chapter 4
lol fun and cutee
| wendy1969 11/1/10 . chapter 4
this is a gr8 fic.
| DreamingCullen 9/2/10 . chapter 4
I found this story today and i love it. Is it possible to have outtakes ? Great story you have here. XD
| Bitten-by-Twilight 6/28/10 . chapter 4
Isn't Bella a lucky girl! 2 hot men at the same time! Damn I wish I was her. You should definetly make this a longer story! One of the best threesomes I read¡! ; )
| sassygirl91 4/9/10 . chapter 1