that was good keep it up

; )

What the hell? Jake's jealous?

Jasper pleasured himself thinking about Bella and Edward? . WOW...

Awww...Nessie's smart!

HAHA Jacob/Bella/Edward ...*shakes thoughts away* *not working, melts*

HAHA telling Charlie will be hilarious!

How will Carlisle and Esme react to the two three-person relationships?

Bella is definitely taking this well...hell, who wouldn't? Married to a hot vampire and then another one joining you? Damn...she's lucky.

hot hot hot

I am in absolute awe of your work! thank you so much for sharing your talent with me/us!

Whoa, at first I thought Charlie was given a little TMI, but didn't see that twist coming... The flashback also nicely summarizes their feelings. Great!

Don't know why you say in the summary there's no plot, I think there is

Very nice :)

I like Jasper as a sub and I enjoyed reading with their vocality and all!

Well done!

And don't get me wrong, I liked all of chapter 1 as well! (And 2)

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Hi there!

Finally I made it to start the Going into Shock series (remember, I was a bit thick to get the order right, we exchanged a few PMs).

I've only read the prequel, will save the rest for tomorrow.

Found it very hot, very sexy :) Didn't expect Jasper to be so sensitive though, I thought he would've approved and had you turn it into a foursome ;)

On a less sex-crazed level, I found the twists in relationships you did intriguing.

Tiny criticism: the second lemon seemed a little repetitive in choice of words.

And two logical mistakes, I think cos I had to re-read to understand: the last sentence in the last paragraph (Jasper...) and in the third last paragraph,last sentence I guess it should say "I run off..." instead of "she runs off...".

I hope I do not appear over-picky, it's just now at the end I stumbled over these sentences.

Will continue tomorrow!

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I loved it...

Hugs

lol fun and cutee

this is a gr8 fic.

I found this story today and i love it. Is it possible to have outtakes ? Great story you have here. XD

Isn't Bella a lucky girl! 2 hot men at the same time! Damn I wish I was her. You should definetly make this a longer story! One of the best threesomes I read¡! ; )

more please