Really good vignette. Loved the entire thing. A Deceptively kind Jun Kazama who uses people for her own selfishness. Brilliant.

I admit I'm quite disappointed that this fic is pretty short. Yet undeniably...eye-opening.

I've NEVER even dreamed of Jun being the evil one in the series. But, WOW! Just WOW!

Great work and you're just amazing for thinking out of the box. :)

Short chapter. But it's like a blast of cold air that hits your face with cruel realization. :)

IT'S ALWAYS !

XOXO

I so love your stories. :D

This is an interesting take on Jun's storyline. I like the way you wrote it out. Keep up the good work!

Considering how so many people regard Jun as such an angel, this is a somewhat daring fic. Flawlessly written and the idea was unique and interesting. I sure will be holding Jun with a slight suspiciousness from now on :)

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Wow, I don't think I've ever come across a fic depicting the "dark side" of Jun, cause she's normally described as an angel and the definition of purity. And she's my favourite female character within the series XD

That being said, this is very different and new to me. I really like this view on Jun. And it opens my eyes to what Jun could truly be. Why do we associate the word angel with her in the first place? Is she really as pure as Namco want us to believe? Your fic opens the possibilities D

Awesome, Salysha!

-gasps-! ... Jun's my favorite Tekken character of all time! She's such a twisted character in here ... and I LOVE it! xD Is it weird for me to say that ... I laughed throughout this whole fic? LMAO. It's so funny and no one (that I've come across before) has ever wrote Jun like you did. It's such a fresh of breath air. :)

Hehe me again, I was just browsing your profile and I came across this and... well...

It's freakin awesome.

I love twisted characters and this is just awesome because you've taken Jun and made her not pure! I've always wanted to write an evil Jun fic but I don't think I could write one as good as this. It's a short fic but the language you use is so descriptive and chilling in portraying Jun's deceptive nature that the length doesn't even matter.

The second best bit is is that it all fits with canon perfectly which isn't an easy thing to do with Tekken fics.

The BEST bit is the way you explained something which I've often speculated about because it doesn't fit with Jun's pure persona. I've always wondered why Jun would send Jin to Heihachi, it's like sending a lamb to the slaughter. When I've thought about doing an evil Jun, this is always the plot point it centres around and you've explained it in such an excellent way.

So yeah. It's awesome. Only one thing left to do.

Fav! :D

WOW!Who would've thought that wa of Jun?I mean she always seemed so damn nice!But this kinda thing happens to me so much,like what if this was so and all!Good one!

Short yet very macabre. The lexicon used for this did send a chill through me especially the part where Jun was stroking her stomach, there was eerie and disturbing about a normally warm action. The concise feel to it does strain for full impact, a little detail etc. but nonetheless it was still very good and original.

Hplo.

This is a master piece. Fantastic job S!

yes I like the way you write my friend I really enjoy this take on the whole jun kazuya thing they had :D

This was short but really clever! I never thought Jun actually could be the evil one, but your work changed my mind and made me wonder if she really is so pure like Namco wants us to believe... Simply love your talent, Salysha!

Salysha. Salysha. Salysha.

You have earned my ever unrelenting respect and admiration. This ficlet is just plain wonderful.

You've taken my favourite character, and her hidden malice as chillingly elegant, as sweetly sinister, and as beautifully tainted as her average flip side. This small fic is a sharpened knife craftly hidden in the soft embraces of silk; her sheer destable personna is written with such skill it seemes attractive, sightly even in her unsightlyness. Understated, well crafted, chilling work; fabalous. I love your take on this. XD

Red

PS-I will awnser your PM in a jiffy.

...EPIC. Wording was spot on.

What's even MOAR epic is that you posted something new very fast after the Hwo/Steve one XD