Thank you thank you I felt the same way about the way that ep. ended. this is that best one I have read for an ending. In other words Great Job.

Why didn't Tony know who the girl was when McGee 'Facebooked' her at the beginning of the show? Also, despite her 'bouncing back' I have a hard time imagining paramedics letting a person who needed CPR drive to the hospital in a POV. I'm just sayin'.

This was a wonderful story. Requiem is one of my favorite episodes. I always thought Gibbs's recovery was a bit quick. I like how you filled it all in. And not once was Tony's lungs mentioned. THANK YOU FOR THAT! LOL.

Nice fill in for the ep

Good job, this was a very well crafted story. Enjoyed the interaction and that Gibb dad showed up.

Great episode expander with things that happened after the rescue. loved it.

Great story. Would love another chapter soon.

that was good however I thought I would just point out (not because I'm trying to be mean or anything, but just so you know) that you kind of mixed up the timeline. In the beginning you say that Tony lost Kate and Jenny, but in this episode Jenny was still alive, which you do mention later, but at the end you mention the case that led them back to Stillwater which actually took place in season 6 after Jenny died. I do agree with you however the ending of this episode did seem a bit unfinished

Great story but... "I lost Kate, Jenny..." Who's Jenny? I thought it was Director Sheppard but seeing as she's in the story, well...

That was wonderful! I always wanted the ending of Requiem to be more realistic and in greater detail, and now it is! Thanks, I really needed a good story to read today.

Congrats

Hawkeye