More? Onegai shimasu?

Impressive! I like it so far there are no run ons, well written. (not to judge you no da)

I think it was a very good Fanfic no da!

wow. I love it! I'll be watching for that next part in the arc. please get it out as soon as you can. I can't wait to find out what happened to omi and every thing else for that matter. haiaku onegai! I love it!

I am she who was once called kiyonekawaii, however I've changed my name. I really love this fic. this just keeps getting more interesting! I can't wait for the next part! I love it!

Great fic! Oh, the angst - particularly in Part 3. Poor Yohji. And Part 4... I was hoping. Looking forward to more. _

. Awesome so far - good build up, without getting boring. . Saburo is a nice character, good job on coming up with an original one that fits in so well with the WK cast in general.

this is good I like it! I can't wait to find out what happens next! but if he's not dead then what happened? I guess you'll just half to get the next part out soon so I can find out ne? ok well please do hurry with the next part I love it!

I'm back for the second chapter! geez...what's wrong with plaid? I like anime guys in plaid. and what's with the chick? wow, you need to write more, 'cause this is killin me! please write more, i love the way your portraying the characters. Yohji is incredible in this installment, congratulations! I also like how they haven't said the 'goner's' (as a previous reveiwer stated) name. it makes me want to read more!

You are such a beautiful writer... well your fics are beautiful -I never met you _; I love this story and the fact that it isn't a deathfic (I loathe the buggers) makes me appreciate it very muchly so. I like the way you take your time, drawing the reader into your world. It's something that I lack the patience and talent to do with my own fics so I bow my head to you enviously _ You have other fics that aren't completed. I sincerely hope that you complete them all. Thank you very much for this lovely fic.

OOOOH! Very nice beginnig. I like your OC. He seems cool... So... Omi's the goner? sniffles Poor Omitichi (for now, since you said it wasn't a deathfic). I'll be on the look out for more, k? C ya! and WRITE MORE!

That's awesome! why don't you have more yet? it's written very well, and I want More! (with a capital 'M')! I think you're doing a great job with it, but wasn't Omi the first to join Weiß? Oh well, it doesn't matter that much. write more!

Hmm...very interesting. You've got a really nice start on this story, and I want to see some more coming out soon. First of all, I'll say that your original character is /much/ better than some of the atrocious things that I've seen. He has faults, a believeable personality, and is acting like a perfectly normal person given the siutation that he's in. Bravo. (if you're into Yami no Matsuei, read "Live Through" the orignial chracter in there reminds me of the guy you've put in here, both are very well done)

Your writing style is really good, you write stuff that's believable and isn't a pain to read though. I can't really make many more critiques, seeing as the story line and plot haven't developed that much yet. So my only suggestion would be to keep writing so I can figure out what's going on! I like this story already. Good work