Is it wrong that I kind of love evil bitch Ivy? This story is fantastically despicable. I'm an Ivy worshiper as well, but evil Ivy and broken Rachel are kind of intriguing. As much as the abuse that Ivy puts her through makes me cringe, I seriously can't stop reading. I doubt there is a happy ending, but I would love nothing more than to see Rachel kill Ivy in the most vicious way. I'm not sure I'm wrong for that thought. Keep writing.

Whirlpool of darkness and twistedness in this offered alternate reality - absolutely sucked me into the story! Hope you still intend to continue the plot. Thank you!

Don't mind the haters. If they read the whole thing before telling you they hated it, it still counts. It's crazy dark twisted and I couldn't stop reading. That's what makes it so good. Thanks for sharing

this has been a crazy dark fic. i wanted it to be taken back. for it all to be something that somebody had done to mess with her mind and her relationship with ivy, but i knew it wasn't. i had to keep reading to see how far you'd take it. and you took it really far. i don't know if i'd read a story like this again...

beyond that - job well done. very dark.

I know it has been two years since you updated this particular story but I am late to the party. It is well written and very straight forward but you have completely destroyed both characters. To my mind, you have basically made Ivy into Piscary and Rachel into what Ceri was before Rachel liberated her from Al. Also, in your chapter about Al (who happens to be my absolute favorite character), you didn't quite capture his character traits. He would kill Ivy rather than giving up any claim to Rachel especially since he is getting nothing in return.

I am hoping this is a project you will come back to and finish because while I really dislike the direction it is going in, part of me is hoping that Rachel either frees herself from this situation or the people that Ivy drove out of her life come for the rescue. Right now it is set up so either Ivy or Rachel has to die and that bothers me even more than what happened to their personalities.

However, very well written!

I'll be honest. I absolutely hate this story, but it's very well written and it captures my attention. I can't seem to stop reading it, because I want to know if Rachel will ever get out of this situation. I want to know if ivy dies or is turned around. and yes, I'm pissed that you killed jenks in that way. He's awesome. you could have simply made it so that it had been longer than a few months. maybe he died of old age? There. you asked for it bluntly and there it is.

Wow, such a tragic story. Like a never ending downward spiral.

This story intrigues me-the bleakness, the downward spiral. It seems like this is Rachel's worst nightmare in the books. Ivy seems like an undead version of the vamp I worship I've got to say. You are an exellent author, and I love all your work.

This is an interesting development, I can't wait for the next chapter.

-Kate

This is the first time a chapter has ended without Ivy in full posession of the field. Do I detect plot development? Excellent update.

Great update

XD

I wonder how Kyle will help Rachel? Either way, this story is really, quite painfully tragic. Still, it has a way of drawing you in regardless.

It's kinda like watching a car crash, you want to look away, but you just cant.

I love your story :] It's really intense and even though Ivy's a total bitch, I'm still waiting for her to change or regret it or something...Can't help it. Know it won't happen but still. I can dream :p And I'm dying for Rachel to break free, or hit Ivy back or something. But I love how emotional your story is and I can't wait for you to update.

There is something so grotesque about Ivy dressing Rachel up in a lovely coctail dress, putting bruises, scars and bloody wounds gause covered wounds on display. I visualize it like a Tim Burton animation. Ivy's worry about what people might think after all that is funny in a twisted way.