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Reviews for: He Was My First And She Was My Second
nena101ism 4/11/12 . chapter 2
This story is sooooo good would you please write more. i love it a lot its really good please update soon.
Finalps3 11/27/11 . chapter 2
Preaty good please hurry with chapter 3 can't wait
hot4dbz 5/13/11 . chapter 2
UPDATE! WHO CARES IF ITS BEEN SO LONG. im not trin 2 b mean or nuffin but it story is freakin amazin and u shood continue. C'mon u cant jus leave ur fans out in the cold? *puppy dog face* btw ur added 2 all my favs PEACE O:-)
Panfan 5/13/11 . chapter 2
UPDATE! WHO CARES IF ITS BEEN SO LONG. im not trin 2 b mean or nuffin but it story is freakin amazin and u shood continue. C'mon u cant jus leave ur fans out in the cold? *puppy dog face* btw ur added 2 all my favs PEACE O:-)
review 4/18/11 . chapter 2
its been forever please hurry and update
hadomaster 1/17/11 . chapter 2
very sexy should just make this a yuri keep up the work!
sonson 1/8/11 . chapter 2
Cool so far, I like it.
marai pan 9/16/10 . chapter 2
i think its hot and i hope you continue
Terpsichore 8/23/10 . chapter 2
So HOT n SPICY my girl Cheshire was rite
Cheshire 8/22/10 . chapter 2
Soooooooooo HOT can't wait for an update. I told my friends about it to come and read. I agree with Trinity there should be a threesome
XoBrYtToX 6/30/10 . chapter 2
Definitely loving it! Can't wait for your next update :)
Sarah-leigh 6/20/10 . chapter 2
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!
reviewer 5/13/10 . chapter 1
pleeeeeease update!
Trinity1012 12/21/09 . chapter 1
OK, totally HOT! please continue! and i so hope that there is going to be some type of three some with trunks and the girls, that would be awesome! haha!
Indy2009 12/10/09 . chapter 1
hey, great story i love it, can't wait for your next chapter!
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