That was awesome and cute, I loved it and excellent job but you should have made Grimmjow the older one or the two the same age

AWSOME

OMFG I LOVE THIS SOOOOO SAD YET SO SWEET! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! XD

Squeeeee! I think I'm in looooove with the fic of course :D

O_O I was so sucked into this, this is awesome Poor Ulqui ;_;

Oh my... I was almost crying for laughing so much at Grimmjow's idiocy while having a shower.. XD

And... Ulquiorra's past... omg...so sad... I can't imagine how he must have felt with all the memories rushing back.. poor Ulqui... really made me sad.. D:

LMAO! Ulquiorra thinking about Grimmjow's ass.. made me ROFL... XD Ulqui checking out Grimmy is the funniest thing EVER! XD And his thoughts... LMAO! XD Oh my.. I'm actually crying from laughing so much... XD

Oh my... Grimmjow is so cute... and os is Ulquiorra... poor Ulqui... TT_TT

Kyah! Embarassed Grimmy! So cute!

Lol.. I just noticed that while I was reading my face kept going from- XDD to TT_TT to XDD to TT_TT again and finally to ... you write really well... making teh reader feel the story and teh character's feelings better! I really liked this!

epically awesome

Awesome awesome awesome!

that was brilliant!

:DD

I love the whole idea of ulquiorra's past and grimmjow being homeless :) Such a cool idea

McLeaf

OMFG. this fic is seriously awesome.

seriously. (!)

i feel like someone just threw a lightning bolt through me. xP

i like the way you wrote this, i could imagine everything going on inside my head and I absolutely loved the scene where Ulquiorra was checking Grimmjow out! xD

...and i agree with Dior,

THIS FIC SHOULD BE GETTING WAY MORE REVIEWS!

keep on writing, man(woman?)! im gonna be looking for more of your stories. P

lotsa love,

summerboy103(btw im a girl xD)

SO SWET!

I loved your story. I think they were so well written, you didnt even go ooc! This was great! Sister Kitty :)

First off, I would like to say this:

THIS FIC SHOULD BE GETTING WAY MORE REVIEWS! LIKE TEN TIMES MORE.

I'm still reading your fic (reading and reviewing at the same time. LOL. I do that sometimes so that I remember to review everything I like. I'm weird, I know xD) and I must say that I'm in awe of your writing style. Very easy to understand and the characters are just like themselves. Everything just... flows, you know? There are minor errors here and there, but really, with a one shot this long, I know how difficult it is to check everything. I love your way of describing things. I can imagine everything. And I found it cute and funny the way Grimmjow got soap into his eyes xD He's like a child. A hot one 8)

And damn, Ulquiorra. He's obsessed with Grimmjow's ass! XD Nice. Now, if only that really happened in the anime/manga... I would be happy 8D

“Pervert? Pervert? You were the one staring at my cock a second ago! You are the pervert!”

I love this line. so funny! XD And the inner battle Ulqui had over staring at Grimmjow's butt is hilarious XD

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*has just finished reading*

It's over already? D8 This fic is so amazing! I love it! Grimmjow is so cute when he's flustered, I agree. Gahh this fic made me smile. This is definitely what I needed after reading so many angsty grimmulqui fics :D This is officially my favourite GrimmUlqui oneshot. I look forward to your future works (if you plan on writing more). Excellent work, and I hope my review hasn't bored you to death. I tend to ramble on when I really like something. Keep up the awesometastic work! :D All the best, Dior

Beautiful story and I felt sad for Ulquiorra's past.

I liked it all but just not the ages! lol, I just can't imagine Grimmjow being 17 and Ulquiorra as 19...they are all mid-twenties to me, forever:D lol, blame the manga on that one.

also, there were some grammar mistakes and in one line u used a dollar and yen, different money. 15 yen is about...0,0 cents lol. 100 Yen is about Euro 0,10 cents!

ah well, enough about that, I hope that u continue on writing more Grimmjow x Ulquiorra fics, because i love this one! it's really cute and very glad u didn't put a sex scene in it, that would've killed the fic as it's all too rushed;)

Great job!

Riekie

amazing! really great :D

I loved it! And it was really well writen too :)