I love family stories. They require delicate skill to get right, so I can't help but admire them. This one is spot on, and I'm dearling looking for someone to cuddle with right now.

Awww. Very cute.

Again: d'awwwwwwwwww. Slingshot just...he's got all the gooshy below this tough exterior, and you write him so well. The reaction of the Protectobots and Aerialbots to the Optimus/Megatron situation wrenches the heart.

Also: size differences. You did it again. It's awesome.

Oh, that would be traumatic to find out! *hugs them all* this is so well written and refreshing.

I love, love, LOVE your stories! They are so descriptive and beautifully written. An inspiration for writers still perfecting their style. I love the way you capture the gestalt bonds in your fics.

Beautiful! Such a touching little scene. I adore the way you write these two teams together - making them sweet and sensitive while still real, flawed and utterly believable. The ending of this was breathtaking.

One runs out of superlatives. One really does. And one has a lot of them.

Aw. 3

And I was just re-reading your older fics yesterday! What a pleasant surprise to see a new one up! Thank you!

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You floored me... I may never recover from the cute. CURSE YOU!

::melts:: What can I tell you, besides this being one of the sweetest, cutest and lovely oneshot of yours? I'm running out of thoughts to describe how you write the P-bots and the Aerialbots. n_n

I adore your fics. I ADORE THEM! ::hugs pile of gestalts::

Here, have a kiwi! n_n

TAKE CARE!

MISAO-CG

This? Is awesome. Cuddly-cute (literally, I suppose :) ) in some respects but charged with deeper and more heart-felt emotion as well. That's quite a tough balance to strike. Well done. :)

This is the Aerialbot fic I've been waiting for since I first watched their debut episode. Thank you so much.

I imagine some would say this was sweet enough to rot the teeth. I wouldn't go that far. It was definitely cute, with just the right amount of seriousness added in. You do well with this series.