I am actually crying right now. This story is beautiful poignant, and so many amazing big things I can't even begin to describe. You captured their relationship and the tone of the story perfectly, this continuation is a masterpiece.

Firstly, sorry for not reviewing regularly :(

What an amazing story! Well done, bravo.

The heart rending emotional torture was beautiful. Clearly written from love for both Eli and Oskar.

And the final scenes were insanely intense, and had me gripped until the very end. And what a beautiful end, although not an ending at all, but a beginning.

Thank you :)

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That was awesome.

So much more like 12 year old Oskar and Eli from the book, than we normally get in a fic.

But toward the end of the chapter it got very emotional, in a good way. A very good way.

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I'm really liking this story.

I especially like the little conversation Eli has with herself about Oskar. That is nicely done :)

Well done so far.

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really like the story alot thought it should have went on longer a lil bit at least i always hate when any story i like ends so it no wonder i say that but when you explain the symbolism of all it it kind of makes a sort of dramatic sense i guess you would say to end it like that

This was quite lovely to read. Thank you.

Simply amazing.

All I can say is wow. Your stories are excellent. They could be follow-up books to LTROI. I love how you've put so much detail into everything and blend a little of each genre together, yet manage to keep everything riveting. I liked the ending. I had been wondering how it would end and whether or not I would like it, but it was a good one after all. The story was a little confusing since the chapters were out of order and I didn't realize that untill the end, but other than that it was perfect.

Adeimantus,

Please please tell me you have chapter 15 coming up shortly. I love and hate the ending and I think you know why.

What a beautiful beautiful story

Let the Right One In draws emotions out of me like no other; a mixture of horror, romance and tragedy that no other film has done. I'm happy to say that this story really brings them out: you manage to captivate Oskar's new lifestyle and the sacrifices he is making in attempting to have a life with Eli. I can only wonder where you intend to go with this story, but it has my full attention and is easily my favorite fanfiction for the book/movie thus far.

Terrifying chapter, please don't keep me waiting to long for chapter 13! I just want to see Oskar and Eli back in each other's arms.

Review for chapter 8,9,10

Adeimantus,

As always I love the way you write, and these last 3 chapters have been a pure joy to read. I'm amazed at the increased speed that your stories are published without taking a hit to creativity.

I must say that chapter 9 was the most captivating of all. I was so terrified of what might happen to Eli if they didn't get to the moloseum in time. I also enjoyed when Eli told Oskar she would go to sleep that night and his reaction; it was dead on for a boy his age and the disappoint he would have.

Keep up the fantastic work!

Another childishly sweet point of view from Eli. The whole aspect of Eli as a little kid becomes even more disturbing when you factor in the fact that she killed the old woman. Still, nicely written internal monologue from Eli.

A nice little Christmas story. I admit, I've never heard the Saint Lucia song either, but the lyrics seem a nice touch. A sweet little story.

Chapter 6 is a truly fantastic follow-up to your last chapter. I almost thought Oskar would finally agree to getting infected by Eli , but you took it for a nice spin. That's what keeps me waiting for each new chapter :)Love the sweet ending as well; very touching.