making a blind pokémon fight! what an ass her trainer must be!

I pity Vaporeon.

* trainer.

I pity all pokemon in your fics.

*Takes Vaporeon to release it to the sea.*

Poor, poor, Vaporeon. You don't have to have two perfectly good pairs of eyes to notice a water pokemon needs to swim once and a while. You always write about pokemon being abused by their trainers, and although I don't like to admit it, that's the reality of it. f there was a world where you could catch and control ultra powerful creatures, and if there were as many narrow-minded people in this world as there is now, that would be the sad, horrible truth. This is the best one I've read all day. Nice work.

-spiritwolf101-

vaporeon, right? i feel so sorry for it. dumb trainer.

nice! iz it starmie?

Good (as always). Question though. Are your POVs normally attatched to Pokemon Revolution (I've read every chapter up to date). I think you put in the blue Charmeleon, Scar, Lash, that Raichu (the one that met ElectricAnge), I think more. I like your fics.

Aww ... sad ... sniff. What 'mon was it? I'm guessing a Vaporeon, but ... I could be wrong. You keep amazing me, Farla!

Poor little Vaporeon! *sniff* I love my Vaporeon to pieces! I love your stuff Farla!

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... ::snivel:: Aaw...poor Vaporeon! (I think that's what she is). I feel so bad for her! ::hugs the poor little creature:: I wanna take you home and throw you back in da ocean where you belong! ::hugs her again:: Again, nice job Farla! BTW, I'm taking your Vaporeon(I think)!::runs off with her::

To quote James: Cooooooool!

I like this story, it's much better than my version of the same idea.

James: Cooooool!

Me: Will you shut up, James.

Me: Anyway, a couple of grammar mistakes but this is still a neat story. Well developed with a good ending.

James: Cooo-

Me: James, quiet now, shush boy (hits James with one of Jessie's fans).

Are there lots of Vaporeon fics? I just wrote one and suddenly I see heaps (not that I started it)!

That is so good! It's so sad. :( i would never treat my Pokémon like that.

This is good, I like it. Poor water Pokemon.

That is cruel and heartless what that trainer is doing. Still, I love your writing!

Makes sense. You'd think a water creature would need some WATER to survive and thrive, just a bit more than a quick dip now and again, even daily. Hm. I'm suddenly thirsty. Good story.

i didn't like that its boring