This is by far the best version of what I think Brennan wrote in that letter! I only wish you had continued with the story! :(

please continue this story

This is by far the best fiction I've found on this topic so far. Please, please continue. I really want to see your version of what happens next. :)

what do you mean fin? no fin! keep going! please? *puppy dog eyes*

Oh no this was fabulous - I want more!

I think I am going to like this.

A good start!

Aww, I love it! I love an emotional Brennan :)