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Reviews for: Lilac Embrace
Diggs121 1/18/12 . chapter 3
please update
mayalynch 9/27/10 . chapter 2
Nice Plot! Keep it up!
Gunlord500 7/7/10 . chapter 1
Cool, another FE3 fic and another M rated fic! Nice times in the FE section these days. This is pretty good, but I saw a few grammar and spelling errors here and there-you could use a beta-reader, that might help quite a bit Aside from that, both Shiida and Marth seem pretty well in-character, and the sexy bits weren't bad either. Keep up the good work! :)
nonoma 7/5/10 . chapter 1
plz update
Anonymous reviewer of doom 2/20/10 . chapter 1
Please write more... I liked that...
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