 Gunlord500 7/7/10 . chapter 1Cool, another FE3 fic and another M rated fic! Nice times in the FE section these days. This is pretty good, but I saw a few grammar and spelling errors here and there-you could use a beta-reader, that might help quite a bit Aside from that, both Shiida and Marth seem pretty well in-character, and the sexy bits weren't bad either. Keep up the good work! :) |