This was sooooo good! Heart felt and sad but with a message of harmony. I loved it.

Wow...so...sad... Lynne, you amazing writer you, you're so amazing that you've actually made me sad for a fictional place. This kind of emotional attachment normally only occurs for me with the very best novels and movies and such...you are to be commended for causing me to 'nearly cry.' A fine addition to your body of amazing works.

Oh... oh *wow*... this is so cool my vocabulary went away... just awesome...

Ohhh...that is so beautiful, and so sad. I love this fic as much as I hate it! :-S

This is just the most awesome story! You make such amazing use of the atmosphere in this, I really hope you write a sequel when you have the time. I want to know more about what happens to Dem!

...how..? How.. could.. HOW COULD HE! DAMN YOU! Damn you Purple! How could you! *sobbing* Not thurk, not Rhan, not the trees.. not the ghostlings.. Oh dear god, poor DEM! Poor thurk! They can't sweep it, they just CAN'T! Not Thurk! Not the one planet that's probably the last place of its kind..

This is heartbreaking... I have rarely had the pleasure of reading an IZ fic and having this kind of reaction to it. Everything is.. so real.. everything poor Dem and Rhan are going through.. the themes.. and everything about this fic surpasses everything I could ever hope to write.. You are incredible.. truly, truly amazing.. I love this story so much.. Excuse me.. I need a few million tissues...

Purple you bastard.. not Thurk..

This is a fantastic story!

Poor Rhan..*cries*

Your very good at writting, you get the feelings and emotions just right..and actually convince the reader so much that they begin to feel the same emotions as the characters..

Thats great talent - never loose it

Why didn't I start reading this story before? I dunno, but I sure am glad I took the time to read it all today! The great detail and creativity makes me really wonder why you sometimes say you never have any good ideas...amazing! I mean, you've constructed a whole alien society and language system! And of course you are the master of anti-Irken philosophy... Drama! Suspense! Plus, the little bit in this chap with the Tallest was a brief breath of comic relief (heh, 'this isn't the *good* cheese'...sounds like Mike-the-Brother...). Please continue this; I can't wait to find out what happens to Thurk and Dem and Rhan and everybody! Yay!

-XD! "The Psychology of Smoke and Fog!"

-*lol again at the "Thurk water makes steam...but only with LASERS!" comment*

-O.O Uh oh. This can't be good...

-Oh. Oh, no. Not good. O.

This is a great story! The concept is great, and the storyline is very original... I can't wait until you write more! _ Nevi

Oh.. my.. god.. that was so.. so.. amazing.. My god, Lynne.. I'm crying right now, I swear to Pele. Poor Dem.. he was just trying to be a good Invader. And then his entire life comes crashing down on his head.. God, everything got taken away from him... now what's he gonna do? *sobs* It's not fair! Why does all this bad stuff have to happen to good Irkens! I guess it's going to be for the better though, eventually... Still... poor little guy. I just hope he doesn't do anything drastic.. Dear Irk, this is going to be so painful for him.. Rhan, you bitch, you better help him! Wonderful, emotional.. *hugs Dem* This is a great, great fic.

Wow. _ I like the new chapter! And I can't wait to hear the rest of Rhan's story.

I really like this story so far - you add twist and turns, and possibly future romance..? In any case - excellent work - I look foward to the next chapter _

o.o;; *squeak* What happened to Dem? Nueee.._