|Reviews for A Second Chance at Love|
| coleyyluvsyoouh 8/21/12 . chapter 1
UPDATE PLEASE :) :)
| LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books 8/10/12 . chapter 11
I was a bit uncomfortable when Renesmee was changed to look like 'Ali's Kid' Everything you seem to be doing just feels so wrong! xD Oh god, sometimes in Edward's mind it's like Bella was just a passing 'lover' everything about her less than 'beautiful Bet'
(Does she have 3 names? 'Lizzie, Ali, Bet, Alizabet-that was a bit confusing)
Maybe the things he thinks about Bella is a little too insulting right now. Didn't she die a few weeks ago? He can't really compare Human-Bella to Vampire/Witch-Alizabet. I know he's still in pain but maybe he's just coping a bit 'too' well?
I guess it would be easy for Nessie to look at Alizabet as a mother because she never really knew Bella...Hmm, maybe I'm just missing Bella!
The other thing was the conversations. When Ali and Lise were talking about her feelings for Edward when Nessie was sleeping, didn't anyone hear them? I mean, wasn't there a house full of super-hearing vampires? They didn't seem to be whispering, one time they were ''almost shouting''.
It's a great story, and a good plot but maybe I'm not ready to read about OC's right now. Or, maybe Bella is just too good to throw away so quickly.
| invisible-gurl 2/8/12 . chapter 15
oh man... don't bring bella back! T_T edward and bet are totally awesome together P great job and plz update soon
| dulcesiita 11/14/11 . chapter 14
Emmett will step out of line , .. Poor Bet. Edward knows about Ciaran?
Update soon .
| invisible-gurl 11/8/11 . chapter 14
oh shit... insert foot in mouth indeed... / poor aliza... great job and plz update soon
| writtenword2010 10/20/11 . chapter 13
I'm not a big OC story kind of girl but I just love this story! The characters are dynamic and we written. The storyline has a great flow and the best part, it's not your typical fan fiction romance were the main characters eyes meet and they jump right into bed without ever questioning anything...
All in all, I'd have to say 'A Second Chance at Love' is the top of my OC favorite list! I can't wait to read more!
| invisible-gurl 9/22/11 . chapter 13
oh no... the volturi has bet's baby? oh gods bet's gonna kill them when she find out . great job and plz update soon
| invisible-gurl 9/17/11 . chapter 12
eep update soon plz T_T haha poor edward is so confused XD great job and plz update soon
| Gloo1997 3/12/11 . chapter 11
Really good. I really like this. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| James Gang 5/23/10 . chapter 1
Great Chapter - I love the Volvo part :)Can't wait to read more
| Butterfly Betty 1/1/10 . chapter 8
You are doing a great job with this story! I loved the chapter
| Butterfly Betty 12/28/09 . chapter 7
Another great chapter! I really like Bet. She cracks me up:)
| drakeundone 12/15/09 . chapter 6
I just came across this story and I'm so glad I did! It is really good, I hope you continue with it. Update soon.
| Sakura Lisel 12/15/09 . chapter 1
Dang. The Cullens should have considered making a visual documentation of little Nessie's growth sput over the last three months. If they had a dated video of every day/week/month they made of Nessie that actually SHOWED the little girl rapidly aging to what she is now, they'd have proof to show the Volturi that there is nothing 'illegal' about what Nessie is, and that nobody broke the 'no turning children into vampires law', just IN CASE the Volturi somehow found out about her, whether Irinia had told them or not. *lol*
Unless there have been under special kids like Nessie, there can't be a law against HER type of vampire kid is there, especially since she's aging faster than a normal baby. Pretty soon the vampire child law might not even apply to her if she keeps aging the way she is until whenever her body finally stops. That is if it ever does *lol*
| Butterfly Betty 12/14/09 . chapter 5
I loved it:) Your doing a great job!