|Reviews for When Passion Takes Hold|
| TheWickedKitty 3/5/10 . chapter 1
You'd expect me to be on Neil's side with this. Well, you're right. I do think Knox is being a little selfish. With the "She's MINE" and everything. It's like, dude, we get it. And I mean, really, would Neil ever do that little passionate makeout session with April? I doubt it. Ya know why? 'Cause he's mine ;).
But I do think vicious!Knox is very sexy. I was TOTALLY hoping for some kind of smut at the end...I was a little disappointed when they were undressing each other, but then just stopped. It's like COME ON! SMUTSMUTSMUT. LOL. Just kidding, don't take that too personally, lol.
| Cameryn 12/17/09 . chapter 1
Wow, a beautiful one-shot, really! :) I loved it!
It's a little bit strange see Knox so hot and passionate, 'cause I cant avoid to imagine him clumsy with girls, but it's good :)
And the end is simply fantastic I can perfectly see Charlie saying something like that! :D
| Corky the Quirk 12/13/09 . chapter 1
I would just like to say that I love (love love love!) this story! Your writing is amazing and your style is awesome! I know you've already written a story with Charlie in it, but he is my favorite character (the ending was hilarious!) and I was wondering if you would write another one-shot or something with Charlie! (when you have time or if you wouldn't mind!) Awesome story! Definitely added to my faves :)
| DeadPoet0712 12/11/09 . chapter 1
I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this. It was just perfect in SO many ways. So, so many ways, actually.
Agressive Knox just gets hotter and hotter and the ending was hilarious. Stupid Charlie. At least he was slapped for suggesting that. Share...pft.
I can't wait to see what you write next and I'm gonna go back and read this for the fifteenth time, okay? Kay.