Aww. I really, really wish there were more well-written Chana 'fics. The pairing is rare enough as it is. All good fanfiction writers should go on a crusade and write some Chana stories. xD

Anyways. This was cute, it made me smile. I wish there was more, but I'll live. Thanks for posting!

P.S. I love arrogant Charlie. We don't see enough of him. ;)

aww, Ana and Charlie makes such a good arguing couple, because really, it's the only thing they're good at. This fanfic is all the evidence anyone would need to support my last sentence. Keep writing!

That was adorable! Very well written; it flowed nicely. I chuckled at the parts where Ana and Charlie teased each other.

ha ha this was hilarious! i absolutely LOVED it x

lemme pick out my fave bits

"The monster ate the pilot, it might just eat us next. Dada dee dada….what rhymed with next?” he pondered, chewing the pencil he had stored away specifically for the purpose of song writing." I can just imagine him doing this :) lol glad to see he's continuing with the monster eats the pilot masterpiece!

However, on closer inspection he could see her as the controlling, angry woman she really was. Two aspects about her that repelled, but in someway, interested him even more - LOVE. THAT. LINE. :)

Surely we can come to some arrangement,” Charlie almost pleaded, becoming unsure of the seriousness of her threat. She watched him from the corners of her eyes and smiled, almost flirtatiously - that is SO ana-like its unbelievable x these two shouldve interacted more!

Hold on, I need to pick up the heart you’ve just torn from my chest,” he replied sarcastically. She shook her head and tried to pass him but he stopped her again, “I wouldn’t make a bad boyfriend, you know….unless you wanted me to be,” he winked teasingly at her, awaiting her reaction.

Beautiful! very funny and charlie-like line!

Very funny piece altogether! loved it so much! thanks for this great story. it made my day! :) x

OMG it's been so long since I read a Chana fic, let alone a new one! This was awesome. I wish there was more.

Haha, this was very funny and cute. Gotta love charlie :)