Ok, this is one of those rare fics where you must not keep readers waiting... It's called torture. While some may like that idea, it's still very wrong :) I'm not very clear with what's going to happen, but I'm hoping that you're setting up for BIG revelations. Brava so far, keep going :)

I tell you one thing, with this you entered the terrible and yet so gratifying circle of Fanfic writers... Sweety, this is really good. I'm impressed. You really have to continue writing, this story and others. (after all, practice is what makes you better)

Oooh! You can't stop there.. please continue quickly. I really like the whole format of the story.. it appeals to me, lol. :)

This is really good but I'm kinda not getting what's going on

oh please continue! this is so good! i wanna know what happens next! keep me posted at ! thanx a bunch! good job!

Please continue, this is really good. It's sad and sweet at the smame time.