|Reviews for Loose Ends|
| PrettyAnimeKitty 8/20/11 . chapter 2
For your first time writing in different POV's, you did very good. None of the characters sounded the same and I can see every character acting the same in the actual show. This fanfic is interesting, I hope you keep it up.
| PrettyAnimeKitty 8/20/11 . chapter 1
This story is a gem in the Las Vegas fandom :) The writing style is very easy to follow, the characters are wonderfully IN character, and your grammar does not make me cringe like a few stories I've read. Also, it's Danny and Delinda so kudos! Hopefully, you'll be keeping the story up; I'll make sure to read it
| louise 6/26/11 . chapter 1
nice job..i liked the way you tied up lose ends.i never cared fort he last season and stopped watching .things were too differetn for me,.i enjoyed ed,danny,mary and delinda...
thansk for sharing
| jessieclow3 4/18/11 . chapter 2
awesome story! will you be continuing it?
| Lauren 3/6/11 . chapter 2
I really enjoyed your story please please continue with more chapters! I want to know what happens with Delinda and the baby.
| ann 11/23/10 . chapter 2
i really enjoyed first two chapters of your story. i do hope you'll continue to write it. the ending of the show was so unsatisfying.
| phoenix0826 10/8/10 . chapter 2
I've really enjoyed the first two chapters of this story. I'm glad that you started using additional POV's in the second chapter, it gave a more rounded feeling to the story. I think you've captured the voices of each character very well and I am looking forward to future chapters.
| SummertimeStorm 8/5/10 . chapter 2
this was so good if you could please continue it that would be muchappreciated ilove angst and this family stuff and how youincluded Vic and yo"re referencing stuff from the show and making it sound good and real and not cheesy
| Admiral Larsen 6/19/10 . chapter 2
-Really looking forward for the next few chapters on what happens once the baby is out of danger and Ed Deline arrives on the scene.
From what I can imagine, the situation will be mostly serious at first though toned down for a bit once both Delinda and the baby is out of danger and Ed Deline arrives. Then it may descend to a bit of comedy when Ed reacts to what his kids have been doing while he was gone.
| Lyra White 6/6/10 . chapter 2
I started whatching Las Vegas this year, and I'm so angry how they end it. Well.. your story is going pretty well, hope you uptade soon. Please
| OncerSwarekJateGrantGscout22 5/22/10 . chapter 2
awww loved it! I hope Delinda us okay...
| ktms 12/21/09 . chapter 1
Wow,Its absolutely great.I wished that someone writes the story with the ends we knew nice to see one of my favourite author doing it.I should really thank you for doing this besides your busy with characters are great as are fitting in nicely. keep writing. cant wait.
| Admiral Larsen 12/17/09 . chapter 1
Although I am a bit concerned about Ed comming back (not that if they could pull it off well, I would have no problem at all).
Despite that, an excellet story that you have here and looking forward to the next few chapters and all that. First probably got to get Ed's reaction when he sees what has been going on with his absence (not to mention his reaction to the fact that his remaining "kids" had already gotten hitched or were about to).
Next perhaps deal with Ed meeting with Cooper and well mostly thanking him for taking care of things while he was gone.