Reviews for Dismantle the Sun
Arime Setta 4/19/13 . chapter 26
Very sweet story! Enjoyed it immensely - even if the first few chapters were devastating.
thefourthcat4 12/17/12 . chapter 1
I just want to know: is this similar to felix qui potuit rerum cognoscere causes? It was taken down, and i really wanted to read it... but this was good too.
miss insufferable know it all 7/29/12 . chapter 26
ASDFGHJ that was so beautiful it hurts!
karen1025 5/19/12 . chapter 26
Is there a sequel? Please i need to know what is going to happen next. The story is adictive
Karen 5/19/12 . chapter 26
Excellent story! Are you planning a sequel? please say yes and that is ready to post, i'm dying to know what happens next.
enahma 8/16/11 . chapter 26
OMG. I see I have to add you to my favourite authors' list. :-) This story was amazing.
Rivena Verity Vartanian 7/26/11 . chapter 26
I couldn't remember if I've posted a review for this story, but this is the second time I've read through it.

This has to be one of my favorite fanfictions. I read it (both times) in one sitting.

Your a great author.
Olivia-twiFan 6/22/11 . chapter 26
No! You can't stop there. I want to read about the wooing... great story. Wish it was longer
Mimi35 2/24/11 . chapter 26
Beautifull story, so well written, the characters so alive, so human. And what a idea of plot!

And to name the very last chapter "The Beginning" - it begs for begging for more :) So I comply. Might You consider to write some kind of sequel?
makaem 1/2/11 . chapter 26
That was wonderful.
WannabeWolfe 12/2/10 . chapter 26
Another wonderful story. Heart breaking at the beginning and heart warming at the end. :)
excessivelyperky 10/11/10 . chapter 26
And nothing, absolutely nothing reminded him of her any more. He had even burned the two letters he had written in a drunken stupor. Hermione was most definitely off his mind.

-Snicker. I bet he planned to tell himself that every day from now on, too.

I'm glad that Hermione went to him, though. (And I noticed that Aleia forgot to mention that it was her idea for Hermione to move in with them in the first place).

But I'm so happy that Hermione decided to make the first move.

Good chapter!
excessivelyperky 10/9/10 . chapter 25
I wish he was here with his godchild, helping me. Maybe taking him off my hands for an hour or two.

-Yes, with Hermione, it's still all about what he can do for her. But back when she sat with him, she had a choice. She could have stayed for him instead of going off with Ronald. But she didn't-she chose Ron.

Lucky for her, Snape is in love with her and soon she won't have to care what he really wants, since he wants her, and will be willing to do anything for her. She will never have to worry about anything she can do for him.
shoestring potato 10/8/10 . chapter 26
RAWR! I will unabashedly ask for more... NAAAOW! I can't believe you've left the exciting bits to our imagination. Oh well, that might actually work.

*imagines hermione doing this and that to snape*

*snickers*

Great fic, as expected :)
excessivelyperky 10/5/10 . chapter 24
"What do you want from me, Hermione?"

-And even believing that all she wants is more and more and more from him, he still wants her.

Wouldn't it be nice if someone _did_ want to do something _for_ him for a change?

Perhaps this rejection will be a wakeup call for Hermione. After all, everyone's wanted everything from Snape, and he's given it without getting much in return.

Maybe it's someone's turn to give to him. Hopefully Hermione will finally figure this out. Nobody else seems to have.
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