|Reviews for Pinch Hitter|
| JellalxErza 5/13/13 . chapter 1
I really really loved this story! You should write more like this! Anyways thank you for writing this it made my day better:)
| StarofJems 4/5/13 . chapter 9
Oh my dear lord. I don't even know if you're still active on this account but I've recently gotten back into KHR and reread the whole series and have been scouring the internet for good, long Yama/Goku fics and this has got to be the best I've read so far. Your characterization is just so ugh perfect god I want to cry and the perfect and it's so well written I think angels are singing. And I just love how you incorporated Gokudera's Italian heritage and gosh I think I've died and gone to the heavens because just so wonderful. A A A crying forever at perfection. Maybe one day you'll get a KHR kick again and feel like coming back to your old story :')
| wolfeclipse25 1/21/13 . chapter 8
I was worried that Yamamoto wouldn't like 'Mythbusters' but he did! What a relief! This chapter was amazing. I loved the interactions! And Uri! Uri is like my third favorite character in 'Katekyo Hitman Reborn!' He acts like he hates Gokudera, but he doesn't really. Proof is that Uri eventually went to lay next to Gokudera!
| wolfeclipse25 1/21/13 . chapter 7
I loved this chapter! It was an amazing Christmas chapter. I learned about the 'seven fish' thing a bit in school because a student teacher had Italian family and was talking about it. Personally, I don't like fish, but I like fish sticks. Even if those don't count, it's still a step towards liking fish in my eyes.
Of course Gokudera would like 'Mythbusters' because they blow stuff up.
| wolfeclipse25 1/21/13 . chapter 6
Ha! I love it how Gokudera's like a jewelry- excuse me, 'personal affects'- guru! I also enjoyed how you put in how his biological family is doing. The part when Yamamoto and Gokudera are talking about the Italian language is great too. I love though, 'It's gotta be something good! And nothing baseball related!'
'AwW, such a spoilsport! I bet Tsuna would be great at baseball, maybe we should get him a mitt!'
'OVER MY DEAD BODY.'
And in the party you said Dino had somehow convinced Hibari to come even though he was still hurt from his 'negotiations' with Tsuna. Hmm, do I sense romance in the air?
I really enjoy how you write the characters overall.
| wolfeclipse25 1/21/13 . chapter 5
I liked the ending with the 'I'm Italian and I care about Christmas,' followed by 'Oh, then what do you want for Christmas?'
| wolfeclipse25 1/21/13 . chapter 4
Haha! Yamamoto and Gokudera both got hit bu appliances holding lights! (Lamp post and light holder)
| wolfeclipse25 1/21/13 . chapter 3
Wow, this was long! Amazing story though! I liked the Hibari-Gokudera interaction.
| Fi Suki Saki 12/13/12 . chapter 9
THEY FINALLY KISSING! OHMYGOD! COOL! GOSH! IT'S THE BEST! XDD
OHMYGOD! YATTAZE! Although they still not dating YET, at least their relationship already more than just best friends!
I hope there will not had any wrong thing again to happen! If there will have, you should change the genre to become Drama! I can see the deep thing of friendship, thx for Tsuna always there for them! But the deep Drama about being bullied and the deep feeling they has is so something! I even wondering why this fic that just has two genre; Romance and Friendship, can be this DEEP more than the real story that has friendship too!
ANYWAY... PLEASE UPDATE! DONT ABANDONE THIS!
THIS IS SO GREAT!
| Double-Gemini 11/5/12 . chapter 9
Perhaps the most realistic take on YamamotoxGokudera I've ever read and I'm so glad to have found it. Most fanfics about this pairing are either "they hooked up when no one *coughTsunacough* noticed and here are their daily antics" or "incredibly angsty/sappy romance about the two of them falling in love and the drama that ensures with a splash of KHR style of awesomeness" so I was really glad to have found this. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| yconne 8/27/12 . chapter 9
This made me laugh and grin like a freaking lunatic because it was so good and just downright adorable! More please! XD
| eternal-anime 3/27/12 . chapter 9
SOO CUTE! i love this! please update again soon! thankx :D
| Ligare 9/21/11 . chapter 9
Gokudera is sure lucky. I've never witness the kind of love Yamamoto heaped on his head in real life. This is not only based on mere personal experience, of which I have none, but I've never seen it on others. I imagine Yamamoto probably treats love the way he treats baseball and swordmaship, straightforward and with his utmost devotion.
Right now Gokudera has the upper hand because Yamamoto is the one who speaks first and will probably always be the one more honest of his affection.
| Yue 6/16/11 . chapter 9
OMG, you deserve a billions smashing reviews for your awesome story. I mean it. really. Super awesome job. I loved every chapter and each ending kept me wanting more. Thank you sooo much for writing a MORE than super awesome 8059 fanfiction. I enjoyed this immensely.
Your new fan,
| Jury 6/8/11 . chapter 2
I'm sorry but I noticed in this paragraph
"Ah-!" Yamamoto scrambled to find the four fuses, pinching them out between thumb and finger before he gave a relieved laugh, holding the four sticks in a crude imitation of Gokudera's skilled hands. "Haha- that would be dangerous even with fireworks!"
That if u X out somestuff you got... Smut. XD
But ur story's good could use more tsuna action but ok may I say awesomly awesome