This is brilliant and so sweet :) greatly written. good job

Loved it

Writing:complete awesomeness!*o*

Alice and Hatter are uber cute together.

Please keep writing!

Brilliant One shot!

I completely agree with you! I LOVE HATTER! The moment he turned around in his chair I screamed, "HOLY SHIT! IS THAT THE HATTER? SERIOUSLY? HE IS HOT!" And then when the mom said something about a constuction worker finding Alice, I said. "That's Hatter. It just has to be Hatter." And then when it turned out to be him, and he and Alice kissed, I screamed, "YES! FINALLY! I SO CALLED THAT ENDING! I SO CALLED IT!" And in the forest when Mr. Jack (Blech) interrupted tham, I said "So close. So figgin' close. WHY? Stupid Jack..."

And Alice was a brilliant peice of work. This version was probably more accurate then the others because the girl 'Alice' was based off of had black hair. Not blonde. And for some reason, I have always wanted the Hatter to end up with Alice. Always. Don't ask me why, I just have. Except the disney version. That is the exception. That would just be pedophilism.

I find it really funny how everyone in Wonderland had an accent. Did you notice that? And the Jabberwocky was a bit of a disappointment. I really liked the 'emotions from Oysters' idea. Truly brilliant. And the actors and actresses were AMAZING! I mean, the girl who played Alice wasn't really pretty, but that doesn't matter. She did an amazing job! And Charlie was absolutely hilarious.

Speaking of, I'm writing my own rewrite of 'Alice in Wonderland'. It's called 'Murderland' Not as messed up as it sounds, I swear. I kind of stole it from my friend, but it'll be different than what she's writing. Would you like to hear about it? And what are any of your other opinions? I'm curious.

By the way, your story was really well written. I liked it a lot. I just loved the ending... *Fan girl squeel* Well, that was uncharacteristic... O.o

very well written and very sweet. I liked reading this one

ashley

Loved this story :]

YES!

you noticed that he had a hat in his hand!

you're the only person so far who has noticed that [besides me], and included it in there fic.

good job in this, short and sweet.

very nice.

:)

aw

I love this.

You've written Alice's confusion and acceptance of everything that has happen to her and her reunion with Hatter ('sigh') very, very well!

Love it

Great Job!

Love it! My heart leapt when she said his name and jumped in his arms. I agree I was also rooting for him from the moment the show started, none of that Jack crap. Great one-shot.

Excellent.

And so you know.

I was rooting for Hatter at the same exact time. XD

-UbiquitousPhantom-

Very good.

It's very discriptive and everything flows very nicely. This is the type of emotion that one would expect in a situation such as this. I give a 4, the highest on the rubric that I use when evaluating writing. Hmm, that makes me sound like a teacher, which I am not. Regardless, this is a perfect example of what Alice would be going through. Well done.

Agreed! I saw the last part a few times before I ever saw the first one. But regardless, you can't help but fall in love with his character within a few minutes. Or seconds. Whatever. Great story. Absolutley loved how you wrote this.