 sailoryaoimoon 5/27/04 . chapter 19;_;
I so sad...Great story, and I'm so glad you decided to put Akito and Gai back together by the second arc. *sighs*
I;ll be sure to check out the final third part too ;) |
 the FLameR 2/8/03 . chapter 1 good story, but why do you have so many chinese characters? |
 Mitsu 11/3/02 . chapter 19 YIKES. That was quite the emotional roller coaster! And hey, let's hear it for REALISTIC RELATIONSHIPS! People break up and make up all the time. I'm glad you included it. Although I was very sad to see the shounen ai go, it made the story that much more...real. But in the end, it's all good, 'cause I've got your sequel in sight and my fingers crossed! I'd make this review longer, but I'm over-eager to go read "Love never Dies, Hatred never Sleeps." So I leave, letting you know that I absolutely adored this. Very, VERY good fic. - |
 Greg OSullivan 9/3/02 . chapter 19This story contained some really nice scenes, the Ryoko talent contest was really well done. It seemed like there was a little bit too much re-telling of the original Nadesico story is some places, but nothing a bit of ruthless editing couldn't fix. Overall I give this story the thumbs up, a very good Nadesico fic. |
 shadowwolf75 9/2/02 . chapter 19Whee, a bit anti-climactic, but then so was the original. This was great! Oh, and I predict plenty of Akito-bashing in the near futur and you know that's ALWAYS good! |
 Bearit 6/10/02 . chapter 14Errrrrr... Akito needs to learn how to cool his temper. ;;;; But... damn it. I LIKE those two together... mou... but I do have to commend you. Most people have a couple they love have a perfect relationship, but you didn't do that with Akito and Gai. Very nice surprise in THAT sense. A HORRIBLE surprise when I'm actually LIKING those two together. -_- So, Yukina is coming onboard, eh? YAY! That means Tsukumo will follow, and I can't wait to see how Tsukumo and Gai would get along! But first, since it's coming up sooner, I wonder how Yukina would react to Gai... hmmmm...
Keep it up! |
 MnY 6/6/02 . chapter 13 The story is great and fun! Please, write more! |
 shadowwolf75 6/4/02 . chapter 13Well, it's about time I got off my ass and reviewed this agai very cool chapter, I really liked how you got Jun in with the other pilots! Really, he deserves so much more than what he gets in the serie Yurika sucks for not paying attention to him! |
 Bearit 6/1/02 . chapter 13Heeeeey... it's about time I reviewed! Go me! XD Anyway, I really and truly enjoy this story. It's always fun to see how Itsuki and Gai would have interacted with the other pilots... with the shounen-ai thrown in! Me likes shounen-ai. _ This is a fun fic to follow, and I sure can't wait for more. Ganbatte kudasai, ne? _ |
 Enigma O 5/18/02 . chapter 13Yay! Jun is my favourite character, but there are so few fics with him in them... Most just ignore him. But this is great. (I also really like the rest of the story too, not just the bit's with him in). The only problem I have is that I sometimes get confused as to who is speeking when several people speek in the same paragraph, other that that it's really great! |
 Tory 5/17/02 . chapter 12 I still liked it, despite it not being Gai/Akito-centric anymore. But Yurika's performance really annoyed me. Then again, she annoys me in general. I guess it shows you really can write well when you manage to write an annoying character truly ANNOYING! ::kills Yurika::
Anyway. I'm kinda confused since I haven't seen this ep (or Nadesico at ALL) in a while and whatnot. It helps to KNOW the fandom you read. I don't know it well enough. (*) |
 Tory 4/28/02 . chapter 11 Of course I loved it as usual Tabby-chan (spatula-flinging Akito was kind of amusing), but one thing I noticed is that you kept switching from past-perfect to present-progressive tense (I think that's what it's called...) If I've got it wrong, what I mean is you went from "The flirtatious pilot jumped up and ran to the ordering counter." to "The flirtatious pilot jumps up and runs to the ordering counter." Not in that instance, obviously but I was just using it to show the tense change. I still liked it though (Omoikane is such a cutie...). |
 shadowwolf75 3/22/02 . chapter 2*falls over twitching* ga need new chapter . . . |
 shadowwolf75 2/11/02 . chapter 10Stalking Munetake-fan, am I? *shrugs and takes it as a compliment* Yeah, you handled the Admiral very well in this chapter, and I salute you for it since I know you don't like hi really, it can be hard to write about characters that you dislike!
Anyway, this was really good, keep up the good work! |
 Sivi 2/1/02 . chapter 9 As fun as AU is, my vote goes for the realistic one because it is better not to be *too* delusional, I think. ::coughs:: I don't make any sense. Just ignore me. |