|Reviews for Electrons|
| Vulpixi Misa 7/19/11 . chapter 1
I don't ship these two normally but I did enjoy their rivalry, and anything that has to do with Paul and Ash is good to me. But anyway, this was incredibly adorable that I have no other words to describe it besides SO INCREDIBLY ADORABLE. I wish you can write more, perhaps maybe have Pikachu returned to Ash? (And maybe have some Electabuzz n Pikachu times?)
| Farla 12/13/09 . chapter 1
Don't write nonsense and then a translation next to it, just write the translation.
You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. Similar reasoning should be applied to terms like trainer, types like electric, moves like thundershock, items like pokeballs and undertakings like journey.