Very nice :D i kind of like means little side relationship.

Are you still continuing this story?

I sincerely hope so because it's my favorite on here!

PLEASE PLEASE Post the next chapter. I started reading yesterday and I've been hooked on this story since. I love the writing style and how you change the point of view of the characters. The plot is the best part of teh whole story!

Don't worry! This is totally worth waiting for! I love it, both your chapters and the chapter's of the first author. You had some really big shoes to fill and you filled them well. All I can think in the recent chapters is 'poor Mulan' and 'poor Shang'. I really hope Shang comes to rescue her before she's given to the Sultan or one of those jerks at the camp do something worse to her. I can tell from some of the hints you're dropping that Shang and Mulan miss each other more than they're even letting on to themselves. At least Mulan knows she loves him. Stubborn Shang! And as for Jin... I will climb into this story and rip his head off myself.

Update soon!

eek next chapter please :D

I rarely leave reviews anymore, but I do believe your work warrants it. Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. I remember reading the original half of the story years ago, and was thrilled to see that you had picked it up. At first, I was quite hesitant that the second half would do justice to the first, but you have exceeded all of my expectations. You write extremely well and I do hope that you plan on updating soon! (I went back and looked at when other chapters had been posted...and you seem to have about a six month gap here and there...so hopefully we're due for an update sometime soon? :) )

Hopefully Mulan does not truly have feelings for this Turk. That would be horrid! Her and Shang, gah perfection. I loved the bit of romantic/sexual tension you began to develop a few chapters ago...I want more!

In any case, I sincerely hope you update soon! Fantastic job in any case.

OMG! This story is fantastic! I can't stop reading and re-reading! And poor Mulan. Hope she will get over this situatin (as always).
Keep writting! I'm dying to know the end! ;-)

Wowwowwow. I couldn't stop reading, so i'm sorry that i didn't review on the other chapters. But i'm in love with this story. Please continue, and let Mulan be saved. :(

oh my god luo jin! O.O now thats a twist! awesome!

ahh i guess it was better than an interruption, it was his own choice, silly shang is scared bless xD and was it me or did anyone else notice he said relationship, when its a friendship...ohh love this story :D

both were right, her tone wasnt right, shang was right about that but mulan was more right too but might have gone a little too far to punish her...i mean yeah she maybe be a captain but still is a woman really and she didnt really do anything horrifying she just raised her voice too much

Its been awhile since you updated...:( I love this! By far the best Mulan story on fanfiction! Please update soon!

Why did you stop writing?

I can't believe you have been writing this story since 2009. I was just starting my freshman year of college when you started this story and I am finishing my senior year of college now. Its been a long 4 years I a msure. I can't wait until you update again. I'm sure this has been a hard story to write, however it is one that is very interesting. Please update soon!

there is many ways thta she could survive whit out doing something like that, so please update soon