You should create more chapters, AND a songfic...

Solid and romantic, and above all I think that's just what Sly would have done were this actually in the games. Very well done.

Sly: Hm, perhaps not PRECISELY what I'd have done.

Me: What the-where'd you come from

Carm: FREEZE!

*puff of black smoke*

*FZZT!*

Me: *shot by shock pistol* REALLY?!

Love it! Would like to see more!

That was fantastic!

However...

"Sly," she muttered

"Evening," Sly greeted

You forgot the periods...

It was great, though. Be proud of yourself. Welcome to my favorites, story!

Good Story!

You wrote a fic for THIS fandom too? You have good taste. (:

WELL, I like this. They're in character, which is always a good thing. Unique idea.

Pretty good.

I like it! Good job! One of the better sly coopers I have read! Good job my friend!

- The Hidden sith, author of Stargate: Galactic Kingdom

So glad u wrote tis. Theres been a real-downturn of stories here lately. I'll be waiten on your next story,Keep up the good work.

AW, TOO CUTE LOOVE IT :D

very awesome story

aw...such a sweet story...really nicely written too!

OMG that's so sweet and adorable! :) Wonderful work you two! This is awesomely cute!

Vundevar.

i loved it great story perfecttimeing for everything