wow good job didnt expect the end but i thnk alecbella is a better match than felixbella or even edwardbella (plz dnt kill me for tht comment) :D

im glad she finally found out the song she always hummed was bellas lulliby by edward! update soon!

Luv the story! PLZ UPDATE SOON!

cant wait 4 da nxt chap

Uh...um...well...let me just get to it.

Your writing format is wrong. Every time a different person speaks, it is a new paragraph, because the point of view changes. You are writing the dialogue of different people in the same paragraph.

Here is an example of what you should do.

"But, that's not possible...is it?" Bella asked.

"It wasn't, until you came along." Edward replied back. Suddenly, something jumped on his back. It was Alice.

"Hey Eddie!" Alice said, all excited.

"HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU NOT TO CALL ME EDDIE!" Edward exclaimed.

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Like that. But, I like your story D

Amy

PLZ update soon! I luv the story! :)

im surprised jacob didnt confront her! update soon!

i really like this story, hope for update soon :D

i really good! i loved it! update soon!

wow i cnt wait for mre im so glad she is starting to get her memory bak :D

lol i loved when edward came up and kissed her and she pushed him away! that was hilarious! update soon!

PLZ Update soon! I luv the story so far! :)

That was so great what she did to edward

Lv the story! PLZ update soon! And sorry for not helping u with the chapter thing u sent me, I wasn't on fanfiction for a little while! It's cuz of my textiles class, i'm working on a hoodie, dress and a skirt! Sorry once again!

PLZ update soon! Luv the story so far!