   Tavish McFini 11/15/02 . chapter 3Very nice. The makings of something great right here! I like it a lot. I'nm not sure of what else I could say... but, keep the chapters comming.
"There have been many good stories I have seen over the course of a life time, this is one of the best." - Tavish McFini |
| Ieaos 6/27/02 . chapter 5 Keep The Great Story Going!
Ieaos |
| Ieaos 5/28/02 . chapter 1 Great Story...Can You Write One With Action/Violence...
It Would Be Interesting To Read An Action Story With
Your Writing Style.
Thanks For Writing! |
| Fenikkusu o Kiri 5/17/02 . chapter 4 keep writing...i know how much time you have on your hands. good job! |
| SAWMAN 5/3/02 . chapter 4 Pretty good I like the writing style and the fic moves along really well I hope to see more of it in the near future. ANAM4life |
| Breaking Point 4/6/02 . chapter 4 Enigma, I know you have spare time on you hands. Keep writing. |
| Fenikkusu o Kiri 3/1/02 . chapter 3 Pretty interesting...get the next out soon! |
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