|Reviews for Phantom|
| Anon 4/6/12 . chapter 7
O.O wow this story is amazing! I have been a little insomniac lately and I started reading this last night... Only to find out this morning that it seems like you have this discontinued? Please please continue its so good. Ive never read something like this before the plot seems very interesting and original! You have to update TT
| Freakish Nature 2/6/12 . chapter 7
Wonderful story... Hope u continue
| aprrayn 7/9/10 . chapter 7
Intriguing chapter! This new developement with Sesshoumaru is bound to start up even more trouble for the poor demon lord. Maybe bring him to Kikyou? Great update as usual! :)
| Marguerite Lily 6/29/10 . chapter 7
Hello satirical.. Wow, I'm more than happy that you've actually updated, yay! Thank you very much, I so appreciate it, really.. Hmmn, this whole chapter was breathtakingly beautiful. I must tell you that your writing style was truly exquisite as I was so bedazzled while reading your awesome story.. Oh my, I wonder how things would play out now that the jewel was gone and so was the clay body of a woman that apparently had come to life, uhm, she was the so-called Lady of all flowers, right? Hmmn, does this mean that Sesshomaru's summoning geis was already broken? In the end part, when he did come out from the cave, he was finally enabled to see the aura that surrounded Kagome when he so blatantly failed to discern it before.. I certainly adore where the plot was heading right now and I'll look forward to the next encounter of Lady of all flowers and Sesshoumaru. All in all, this masterpiece was indeed very well thought and well laid out as ever, and I so applaud you for this totally oh-so-engaging plot. I overly enjoyed this amazing read so keep them coming. Please update whenever you can as I can hardly wait for the next chapter, lol. Once again, thank you so much for writing and sharing this to us. Good luck in everything you do. Always stay safe, please. God bless you ;D
| ab.an.nt 6/29/10 . chapter 1
There is just too much that I love about the way you write, and how well your story flows...the characterization, the setting, the background information. I am in awe.
| Saga of Eternal Rain 6/2/10 . chapter 6
Well, since it's already up, you should finish it. It's an okay story-you can make it a somewhat parallel to your fantasty novel you want to make.
| EnigmaticArsenic 5/27/10 . chapter 5
Thinking a little bit more on it, I realized I don't really get into fanfiction for the world-building aspect either. It seems like something that should be... readily applicable, for some reason, even in AU stories. But I guess mostly because those are set in the present day, and not too many fanfics put the characters in a completely different yet similar universe as to the fantasy place they already come from.
Anyway, the point is I do think you've done a good job with what you've got so far- from the political/dominion aspect to the physical traits of the environments of the story and the backgrounds of certain artifacts (such as the Shikon). So maybe you might feel that more planning is necessary, but for now, you've at least managed a very solid base with which to build.
Good luck, good luck!
(On a side note, I hope everything's going well with you and that perhaps things have lightened somewhat with the advent of summer. I don't see your posts too often anymore, but that could just as well be an indication of things going well, since pleasant days needed little thought and little expounding.)
| EnigmaticArsenic 5/27/10 . chapter 6
Nooooo! But it's so good! I read it all in one sitting, and I'm curious to find out more!
Lol. Actually, I can understand where you're coming from and the concerns that you've raised. It's not easy when a story decides to outgrow its original intention and expand into something... nearly impossible to control.
As much as I liked this and would love to continue reading it, I would have to say go with what makes you most comfortable. Otherwise it might just frustrate you. Although, I would also have to posit that there's nothing wrong with a little world building. *wink wink*
| aprrayn 5/26/10 . chapter 6
I can understand the frustration of keeping this story going but when I read it I can never tell if you're struggling! It's just so engaging! I think SesshKik fans just aren't visiting or something but your story has been a precious find for me! If you feel the need to revise, I wouldn't be against it if you can come back with something just as great as this one or better! Thanks for updating us with this chapter at least!
| autumn maiden 5/26/10 . chapter 6
CONTINUE! please please please i am on my hands and knees here please continue!
| Crimson Arrow 5/26/10 . chapter 6
Excellent. Fantastic characterisation and plot. If you're going to revise, make it quick please! I'm sure more people are eager to read this than you think.
Keep up the good work.
| Marguerite Lily 5/26/10 . chapter 6
Hello satirical. Incredibly great as ever. Know what, I do love this story so it's kinda depressing that you're thinking to take it off though at the end of the day it's really up to you and I'll respect whatever decision you make. I just hope that you'll think it over and please I do beg you to reconsider to introduce Kikyou and still make this one as a SessKik fic. Thank you so much. I did enjoy reading this amazing fic. Be always safe. God bless you.
| Marguerite Lily 5/11/10 . chapter 5
Woah,this chapter was plot now really thickens.I do hope that Kagome isn't the chosen Miko,I'm crossing my fingers now,lol.I was curious as to how Kikyou would make her done!
| Marguerite Lily 5/11/10 . chapter 4
Oh,will Sesshy going to marry the Princess?Hmn,I guess Kikyou was the woman he always dreams about,ne?I loved the air of mystery and intrigue you infused in every that Kikyou would show up and meet him. Thanks.
| Marguerite Lily 5/11/10 . chapter 3
This was very well written and the plot has gotten better and better.I loved the way you introduced the characters and you made it a point to give descriptive writing style was . Great job :o)