|Reviews for Served on a Silver Platter|
| KarkatVantas-CG-TC 11/6/12 . chapter 1
OMG I really almost threw my computer my bleach OC is Yumi's little sister so I was like really guys yumi's right you have swords and your soul reapers come on now lol But great story!
| to lazy to log in 2/16/11 . chapter 1
wow-that was...crazy odd. 0_0 I kinda feel bad for Yumi.
| Aurora808 1/3/10 . chapter 1
| Tsukasa Kizuna 12/19/09 . chapter 1
I hope that was Ikkaku's mouth sucking Yumi off...
| Cat Streaked By Rain 12/14/09 . chapter 1
Now that was interesting, poor Yumichika!
| DelMarch 12/14/09 . chapter 1
Very well written, but a warning for non-con would have been nice since this is blatant sexual abuse.
A warning for OOC could be useful as well, since there's no way the Eleventh could be forcefully made to stick around if they didn't want to, especially not with Ikkaku among them. Or at least make it clear that Ikkaku is sadistically enjoying this, and don't make him be all nice and concerned for Yumichika at the end; it just doesn't match.
Other than that, as I said, the technique is really good, no doubt about that.