Hey Lia! I really liked this. At first I thought it was a DG fic but when I realized it was a Luna/Blaise fic it seemed to make so much more sense.

You wrote it really well, but it was so completely heartbreaking. A bittersweet ending.

Now, normally I'm not a fan of song-fics but I am just so completely amazed by this. The song fitted really well, it was perfect.

I hated that you killed Luna though. *glares* That was evil.

A great story though, loved the pairing and the writing!

Maria :)

That was so sad, and it ended with Luna dying! Oh no! But I loved it, I am so weird! My heart felt like it was going to jump out if my chest. I like this one too. I really hope you do another Blaise and Luna fic, no Luna dying this time haha

C.G.

So this is how it goes...I was listening to Hallelujah, reading this fic and suddenly I found tears pouring down my face. A beautiful fic inspired by a beautiful song. I couldn't ask for anything better.

that was so sad ( but a great read.

Absolutely beautiful. Completely heartbreaking.

Somehow I know I will never be able to listen to my favourite song the same way again. This almost made me cry.

Oh God. Gutted. I'm utterly destroyed by this story. Why...once he finds love. So horrible. How bittersweet? Oh, this was too much. Thanks for a great read. We need more Blaise/Luna fics out there.

luna is dead? man.. btw, it's so romantic! love this! :D

Oh Lia, I /loved/ this! Silly me, I assumed it was a D/G and got a little confused at the end, but quickly realised that it was B/L! I've never read a fic, long or short, where Luna was the centre of attention, I think you managed her beautifully. I especially love this song, and I found the way you worked the lyrics into the narrative worked well.

She was a singular creature, complicated and sublime.- For some reason, I really loved this line. I think you've managed to convey much more depth to Luna's character, for all it was from Blaise's perspective, than most people do.

Fantastic, off to the next one I go!

Emma

OMFG! My favourite song with my favourite pairing! Really really beautiful story! :')

I have to admit, when I first read this I totally bypassed who the characters were and read this as D/G. I thought, hmm ... this is a little different and was kind of confused, especially at the end. I then scrolled back to the top and saw that it was B/L and everything just clicked together. The way the story flowed felt very much how a Blaise/Luna relationship would. I don't particularly like song-fics but feel they work for Luna because her character voice to me always comes off melodic. I don't think I'm making any sense; nevertheless, this was so sad and beautiful.

Totally random but I think I enjoy Harry/Luna a bit more but Blaise/Luna is such a popular side ship in D/G fics that I appreciate it just as much. I once read a Luna/Theo fic. I don’t remember where or when but it was cute. I believe the author used the loss of their mothers as a common ground.

O o o h, I'm not happy with you right now, Missy.

You killed Luna and the baby. Even if Blaise would have flaked on her she left him before he had a chance to come about. Isn't the story supposed to go that the baby is born and he sees the light and becomes a better person?

And stupid Blaise only notices that it can be done when he sees Ginny and Draco. After Luna is dead.

You made me cry, and I don't like you right now.

*grumbles* But it was a brilliant drabble.

This is a unique idea. I'm not usually a fan of songfics, but I don't think I've read a song fic that built the song into the story. It's a lovely, haunting sort of song, and you've caught that mood here. It fits Luna well. (it is Luna, right?)

I don't like that the lines they say rhyme. It bothers me; I suppose it doesn't seem natural. Also, you've gotten some of the lyrics wrong-it's a marble arch and a holy dark. ;)

Very poignant ending, bringing Draco and Ginny into it. I am not a great fan of L/B, mostly because I do not see the parallels to D/G that many others draw, but you've done this well. Particularly for doing it over your lunch hour-I'm suitably impressed, darling. Lovely.

Aw, that was sad and somehow sweet too. It's very different to your usual writing because you've mixed the song in with the story, but I like it.