|Reviews for To Make an Heiress|
| diadem-de-amor 1/12/10 . chapter 4
Liked how you incorporate things like "The Bell Test" and how you keep everyone in-character. Hinata's revenge was kinda swet too. ]
| strawcrepe 1/12/10 . chapter 4
nice job hinata! hope we get to see itachi's thoughts next..
| strawcrepe 1/12/10 . chapter 3
love the devious itachi! pretty cunning and at the same time sweet!
| strawcrepe 1/12/10 . chapter 2
jumping right into the drama i see :]
| strawcrepe 1/12/10 . chapter 1
hmm very cool! hiashi hires itachi and DOESN'T want him to marry his daughter?
| Windflight 1/12/10 . chapter 4
Wow. That's something. Go Hinata!
| KibasNo1Fan 1/12/10 . chapter 4
genius absolute genius, u kno if it was me i would have found his favarite old teddy and flush it down the plz update3
xoxo big fan3
| lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl 1/12/10 . chapter 4
| nwyd 1/12/10 . chapter 4
HA TAKE THAT ITACHI! whee update soon please!
| Aixyutin 1/12/10 . chapter 4
I adored this chapter.
Adored, adored, adored, adored!
It was a twist I frankly was not expecting. But it made sense. I applaud you for your foresight and planning!
And I do believe, Sasuke is darn likeable in this fic. :)
Looking forward to future updates!
| aquamarine-acaia 1/11/10 . chapter 4
i dont quite understand how the end bit could be consedered revenge but this was still pritty good update soon :)
| Tenflowers 1/11/10 . chapter 4
Whoa! Cool chapter! I got a lot of my questions answered from that little bit of intro about Konoha. This is a great, canon accurate story! Now I'm just wondering what Hinata's next assignment will be, and what Itachi will think of her after this...
| haxxingan 1/11/10 . chapter 4
nice! so good Hinata came out on top of this one!
| cheg 1/11/10 . chapter 4
Wow. Freaking awesome...Sasuke's issues, Itachi's issues, Hinata's issues, even KIBA AND SHINO'S issues...we get such a neat picture here of everyone involved!
The nice little expo about Konoha at the beginning is well-done. It's a great piece of writing and I'm so glad we're seeing more of the world these guys come from!
Canon refs, as always, are spot on and hysterical XD
| winterkaguya 1/11/10 . chapter 4
Huhuhuhuhu...I guess Sasuke would've been more than glad to help Hinata, I mean, it's a good opportunity to get back at his older sibling, huh? I think Sasuke and Hinata would've made a good team together. Though I was pretty surprised at how Hinata planned, I mean, at first I was a little confused at Hinata's plan that I had to re-read the last part a few times actually.
So, Sasuke and Naruto "fought" each other and the bleeding Sasuke was Itachi's weakness? Hm...which means that all Itachi have "taught" Sasuke gone to waste (or so he thought?)?
Anyways, looking forward to see what will happen next...update soon