|Reviews for The Return of the Heir|
| fanffic reader 4/29/13 . chapter 1
beautiful story, really a piece of art
| SakuraHimeYoi 4/10/13 . chapter 16
| Beautiful-Tyrant77 2/22/13 . chapter 10
Damn I think I just had my first heart break. My chest was hurting and tears just let themselves out. Just playing but it is sad that Itachi told her those words. I love your story, the characters seem so real and I love that about your story.
| thegirlofmanymoods 2/9/13 . chapter 1
I am so mad at you right now. You made this so good that, this morning when I was just glancing at the prequel, I became so interested that I had to sit and read both stories and miss an entire day of studying.
This was seriously really, really good. I usually hate reading stories where Sakura ends up pregnant and has a kid, but you really made it work well. I thought the Kakashi/Rin moments were really good as well.
You should be proud of this because it was really well done.
| Let'sShakeItUp 2/2/13 . chapter 8
Yes! I knew it! Ryo was a kid! -
| Kurenai no Chinoumi 1/16/13 . chapter 16
Hooray for happy endings! I absolutely loved this story and it will be one of my all time favorites for sure! I had a feeling things wouldn't have worked out in Konoha or Yugakure. You've written a great story! (:
| Kintora 1/14/13 . chapter 16
I am speaking to you, as a warm puddle of goo. I'm totally floored with this story - definitely one of the best, if not the best Naruto story I've come across. You are a very talented writer, and this two part fanfic has left me gapping like an idiot. It was just so hard to peel my eyes away from this story to do necessary day-to-day things like sleeping and eating.
Wonderfully written. So very satisfied - I will be sure to revisit this again!
| adeaerdna 1/4/13 . chapter 16
Thank you for the wonderful story.. :)
| xMekachi.Firefly24kk 1/3/13 . chapter 16
Awww :) I'm sad that this story has to end but it ended beautifully. I'm really going to miss it :')
| mysterybeauty 1/2/13 . chapter 8
My intuition was right
| mysterybeauty 1/2/13 . chapter 4
I believe there is a double truth to Ryo, i have my speculation.
| mysterybeauty 1/2/13 . chapter 1
Great way to start off the first chapter!
| Kyuubi's Angel of Darkness 12/28/12 . chapter 16
This story and The Lost One... DAMN they were like my own personal brand of crack! You are such an excellent writer and you have rapidly become one of my favorites! You had such great plots in both stories, great action scenes, witty dialogue, everything a reader could possibly dream about! Thank you so much for writing this! I'll continue to read your stories forever because you seriously are an amazingly creative and excellent author! You rock you rock you rock, I can't say it enough! You had me interacting with the story, i was yelling at characters when i disagreed with them! It was probably one of the funniest things i've ever heard myself do. Such a marvelous read really! I seriously love you!
| JeanyDeiXzz 12/27/12 . chapter 16
oww, you wrote such a beautiful story :3 I trully loved it, you know, because at some point it made me wish my life was like that of Sakura's when she found a "temporary father" (Gaara) wick meant that she wasn't alone, and she found Ryo'd true fahter who was actually willing to act as one, and it also kind of makes me sad since I'm a single mother and all that... So at the end, you could say it made me cry a bit.
So thank you for writing this, so loved both prequel and sequel and they are both on my list of favorite stories. I hope you read this one day, I would he happy to know that you got the chance to read my silly review x3
Have a wonderful day, and life with your little baby :3
| JeanyDeiXzz 12/27/12 . chapter 15
hahahahahahahha, so of was all a missundrstanding!