:) I just reread this lol Im hoping you update soon cause this story started out so awesome! Love this! Thank YOU! w

I LOVE this story!

Do not talk yourself down by saying it is ramblings, I think you have done an amazing job so far with this fiction!

I urge you to please continue and update this story! You have a wonderful plot that has many readers hooked and I hope that you complete it soon!

I am eager to know the crime in which lady melodina was found guilty of and executed for! I have a feeling Jazz's nightmares tie in somehow with this mysterious femme...

Awww now that was cute.Can you please update soon?Pretty please I'm killing to know what happens next. And will OP kiss Jazz finaly?

aww, that list bit thought by Jazz was too cute this is an awesome fic by the way, and I really can't wait to read more, well if there will be more, since it's been a while since it's been updated. Well either way, I really can't wait for more, oh and I hope Ultra Magnus finds someone, is only so he can actually smile for once XD hehe well anyway, later, and have fun writing :D

I Loves This Story. I have reread this a ton of times!

Hope an update comes soon x3

but take your time life comes before fanfictions.

I. LOVE. IT. You are simply amazingly friend! I know you have a lot going on but please continue the story! I love the whole story!

Very very interesting. I look forward to anything else you come up with.

This is totally awesome! I've never read this pairing, but i think you might have just converted me! And to think I was such a hardcore Prowl/Jazz fan! hehehe, I hope you update soon! :)

GAH!

I should be sleeping it's 2am in here.

Your story just keeps me going and going and grin and laugh and DAMN excited.

Have to get SOME sleep.

Be back later as soon as i wake up.

MAAAAAN... WHAT A STORY!

WOW!

I just started this story and am throughly excited about wher it seems to be going. WIsh I found it earlier.

Love it by far

You have confused Lord Cotexion with Lord Prixus in part of this chapter. Just before Prixus insults Prime.

Well!

I don't normally read Jazz/Optimus stories (actually, I don't normally read Optimus stories period for some reason...) but this one was quite good! I hope you continue it.

I adore this story so far and wish to read more of it. Please update as soon as it's easiest for you.

Wow... this took me 2 days to read through, and it is so GOOD!

Idk if I already reviewed or not but I've just finished rereading this story again and I love it! Can't wait for next chapters! Take ur time though no rush :)))