   nicekittyrawr 7/24/11 . chapter 1*fans self* Don't blame Bella a bit for that one! |
| BittersweetLeo 5/31/11 . chapter 1 I am a huge fan of yours, and I am in awe of this piece of writing. It took you less than fifty lines to pack this little one-shot with all this vivid imagery! Amazing! No unnecessary descriptions, the bare essentials are all in here, and very colorful. And the punch line? Awesome! Thank you. |
| edwardxbellatogetherforever 4/28/11 . chapter 1 HOLY SHIT! Is the person Jasper cheated on Bella with, Edward? OMG! Ahaha, that's hilarious. I definitely enjoyed this! P
Thanks for sharing! :) |
| Siriusmunchkin 1/25/11 . chapter 1 That was cute. Bet Jasper and Edward are more than roommates. |
| KNG1986 11/10/10 . chapter 1 what personal experience told me was no more than four minutes with his dick in someone else. Poor Bella, hard to believe Jasper was the one cheating, lol.
The end was great. I laughed my ass off. |
| Molly Dooker 10/20/10 . chapter 1 didn't see that coming. ha! bad pun...
well... cliffhanger. i like it this way though; leave the rest to imagination. ] |
| Twipoptart 9/13/10 . chapter 1 That was dirty! Loved it! |
| FreeloveZilpha 7/13/10 . chapter 1 Wry and witty, and cleverly titled. Loved it. |
| DaniBanani78 6/30/10 . chapter 1 I would love to read more of this. mmmmm...It is great... |
| In.Between.The.Lines 6/6/10 . chapter 1 THAT WAS BRILLIANT. Absolutely brilliant. I laughed soo hard... |
| susayq 5/29/10 . chapter 1 ROFLMAO :)
Susan |
| ajo 4/7/10 . chapter 1 does this imply Jasper was fucking Edward, too? |
| sherylb 3/26/10 . chapter 1 Is it wrong if I found this to be totally HOT? |
| commasaywhat 3/8/10 . chapter 1 OH my fucking shit! haha, if that last part means what I think it means, lol hahaha fucking shittastic! funny shit. |
| Iceblondie 2/28/10 . chapter 1 that was cute and m |
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