 xoxokiss210 3/31/10 . chapter 1a seriously fabulous |
 4kitty101 3/6/10 . chapter 18loved it! |
 xBonesnCsiMiamifan419x 2/24/10 . chapter 18Hello! I read this all in one sitting. It was a very intense few hours! The idea is very good and the whole fic is just awesome! I really liked the dialogue in all the chapters. I felt so bad for Booth/Brennan/and Angela for what they went through. I wanted to give them all hugs, especially in the beginning. The AA Meetings scenes were fun reading. (it all was) Marcus is a creeper. I had goosebumps when I was reading about him watching her from the hole. I was like 'she has superskills. She can beat him up while tranquilized? AWESOME!' haha. I was so very happy that she decided to stay with Booth instead of her dad (even though I love him too). The breakfast scene was so cute! I love Parker! He's so adorable! Ah, David, another creeper! I don't like him. I can't believe Parker got put under by chloroform and Brennan snatched! That was intense reading!
To sum up what I was saying, this was overall very amazing and fun and interesting and intense reading! It was thoughtful in parts, sad, funny, happy and (my favorite parts) Brennan/Booth love! And Parker cuteness too! Thanks for writing/posting! It was an amazing read! :D
Ps. sorry for squishing this into one review.
Have a nice day! :D |
 iztim1 2/18/10 . chapter 18 that was really awesome. I was thinking that I was gonna have to hurt you when I first started reading this chapter. but, of course you had an awesome ending! Really great work. I hope you write more fanfics! |
 brenbooth 2/18/10 . chapter 1love it |
 JuleKiwi 1/31/10 . chapter 18Great fic! Can't wait to read more from you. |
 my-completeness 1/12/10 . chapter 18this was very cute, good work on your first Bones fic! |
 mkbpwb01 1/10/10 . chapter 18 It took me a while to warm up to this story but when I saw that Booth hadn't given up on Bones then I decided it would be good. Hope to hear more from you. |
 Deep-Forest 1/9/10 . chapter 18 i just finished reading this all in one reading and i found it really intriguing and good cliff hangers, most stories don't really keep me interested and i was weary of the 18 chapters there were for me to read because i usually read one shots but it was really good. like i said i usually read one shots and im used to the one scene and if i read longer ones the cases are really crappy but this was well thought out and to me just amazing, i could see this being a finale, a 2 parter because it's longer then most episodes, honestly. i actually think that could be good scenario. i know im probably just some random person ranting on now but i really do think your a great writer and especially for your first Bones Fan Fiction you did an amazing job. (: |
 mendenbar 1/9/10 . chapter 18For all its flaws, that you so kindly pointed out here and there this has been a very good story. |
 Jess 1/9/10 . chapter 18 I loved the story, there were parts that I was thinking that it didn't sound like booth or brennan but overall the story was really good! |
 cmf227 1/9/10 . chapter 18This has been such a great, crazy ride. Enjoyable to read! Thank you for writing it! Definitely looking forward to more from you. |
 joana.nyc 1/8/10 . chapter 18I loved this I really did. I'm just sad that you ended it there. Maybe you can re-visit this a year after? I just think you nailed their characters so well which is why I'm sad to see it end. But it was great! |
 Something Witty Goes Here 1/8/10 . chapter 1Hello! I have been wanting to read this for... weeks? days? but I havent had time! But- hallelujah!- my school called a snow day so I had time! Okay, enough of my ramblings, here is my review of the fic!
I thought the story line was fantastically well-written, you have an excellent voice. I do wish that you had lingered a little bit on Brennan's alcoholism and her struggle with it as opposed to only having bits and pieces of the AA meetings and having the ending with her in the bar. Like maybe having her have a drink and Booth catching her and getting really angry and getting in her face. The drinking aspect was originally what drew me to the fic.
But, alas, I loved it anyway! I loved the angst and the crime, I thought that was so cool! I don't think it really belonged in this fic, but I thought it was an incredible story. You did a really good job with it. So props, Traveler, props!
I do have a request of you, though. I noticed on your profile you are a Kathy Reichs fan, so am I! I have read all of her books a million times, and am dying for Tempe and Ryan to get back together! So I was wondering, could you please think about writing a Kathy Reichs fic? I think you got the show Bones characters' voices down perfectly, so I am curious what you can do with Kathy's creations. There aren't any of Kathy's books down on this site, and I am dying to see a bit of fiction on her! So if its possible, I would thoroughly enjoy it!
But this is a review on your fic, isn't it? Ha ha, I love it and I think you can definately write Bones! So please write more, and congratulations on the success of Drinking Buddies! |
 Kristen 1/8/10 . chapter 18 Here's my feedback: please write more Bones fic. This was so very very good. |