While this started off rather well, it kind of just trudged along then before you could save it and pick up the pace, you just killed it off. Which was really too bad, as it could have been a very good story. Better luck next time.

Cute story. Can't wait to read your other works.

That was sooooooooooo brilliant! Is the monster Xellos was talking about the Lord of Nightmares?

Hey, good fic, xellos is so awesome, might i suggest that you check over your spelling once more? but other than that, onto chapter 7!

Please write more! Sequel Sequel!

this is soo great! post the next chapter soon please!!!

Must continue, can't stop here

Yay! Next continuation.
It seems Xaina and Xellos get along pretty well now.
What does pic][pic]-[pic][pic]-- at the end of your 11th chapter mean?

hey, cool! that was a great story. i'd love to see more about xaina and xellos and all the rest...by the way, the furry wings are a nice little touch.

this was a great story

AHHHHHHHH more please! by order of the god of wolves!

WRITE THE NEXT FIC!! PLEASSSEEEEE!!! Seriously, this is REALLY good, I want more! I NEEED more. ^_^ An hey, what happens if they try and go more than 20 feet from each other? I need to KNOW these things!! More more more more more more more!! Pretty pretty please? With whip-cream an a cherry?

Oh yeah! I definedly want you to continue! Great story!

MEEP! GOOD STORY!! This kicks tushie!! More, please? Pretty please? You've done a wonderful job with the characters, and the plot is awesome. Cat-people rule. ^_^ lol More pweeze.

Hey, i really like this fic. Update soon, would ya? Please?