|Reviews for The Four Noble Truths|
| Gosurori-Otaku 5/9/10 . chapter 6
Oohh... this was so interesting and insightful! Brillinat job, I think you did this really well. :) I especially like Hakkai and Goku's chapters.
| Melody123 2/20/10 . chapter 6
aw bitter-sweetness! But as much as i love to live in the fluff, what this fic is about strikes true :) You have very cleverly tied the principles to the characters, and i love that :) it made me think about the characters a bit differently.
i enjoyed this fic, simply because it is very well thought out! well done :) the only thing is, (and i wonder if this is just me) i like to think the suffering eases somewhat when they are together, in their extremely disfunctional little family... its probably just me being sentimental ;)
anyway, i really enjoyed this fic!
| Patriot16 2/19/10 . chapter 6
Bravo! It was a good fic.
| chiefraz 2/1/10 . chapter 4
Your story is short, sharp and very well written. You interpret the Noble Truths well
| Melody123 12/24/09 . chapter 1
Hm very interesting idea :)
I like how you have tied in the principles with each individual character's story...
Very cleverly done :)
good luck with continuing!
| Patriot16 12/20/09 . chapter 3
I'm just glad that you tried. I still like the fic and I'll continue read it. Keep going!
| Patriot16 12/18/09 . chapter 2
Still interested. However, I have this thing about present tense storytelling. You're telling a story, something that happened in the past even though it feels like it's happening in the present. It's your story, but I just wanted to tell you what people might criticize this story on. Other than that, I like it. I hope it becomes a full story.
| Patriot16 12/16/09 . chapter 1
I'm interested. Keep going.