Ooh, mysterious ending. They all live happily ever after!... Or do they? I really, really, REALLY hope there's a sequel. Bye!

TD (who is feeling very anxious for another story...)

Love is a beautiful thing... Oh boy, a Makuta's comin' into the story. Wonderful. (not)

I hope there will be more in the future. It's an awesome story and I enjoyed every word of it.

Light1396

P.S. You're welcome :)

Oh, that's what the beastie was... xD Yet again, loved the battle moments, and, great chapter. Sorry this isn't much of a review. Times are tough around here... Keep it up!

Light1396

Awesome story. And awesome chapter. So that explains all of it. I hope they get to see each other again, they made great friends. Please update soon, bye!

TD (who is smiling...)

Yayz, dey all live happily ever after. De end. JK. Please update soon, bye!

TD (oh no, I can't stop talking in the Menirun language. Drats...)

So, Yuniro is dead now? I like his ending. For some reason, I pictured my brother's bearded dragon as the 'monster.' xD

And, "aw!" for Rhenton and Negurin

Gotta go, or dinner's gonna burn...

Light1396

Very nice chapter. This story is turning out great. I applaud you. *applauds* Please update soon, bye!

TD (who is clearly going insane...)

The fight scene was awesome. Oh good, she's NOT dead. What a relief...

And so, the evil king falls to de powah of good! They never learn, do they, those evil bad-guys?

Hmm, what's this claw-thing in the portal? Guess we'll find out later.

Light1396

Ek! Suspense, my favorite! Aww, Negurin's dead. KILL THE KING! Frickin kill him! Please update soon, bye!

TD (who is hyped up...)

Well it sure is getting interesting. Cant wait for next chapter!

That last line, kinda reminds me of a movie my family loves. Lol...
Man, this King dude really burns me up. I hope Rhenton makes him pay. Hard. Yeesh, now I'm seeking violence... xD Keep up the great work!
Light1396

*squees* suspense! I loved this chapter, and I liked the part where Lestra bowled Rysavy over. That was kind of funny. I also liked it when Taiyu could hear what Tsonclad was saying about him. That made me lol. Please update soon! Bye!

TD (who is clearly going insane...)

And, they're gonna form a rescue plan, aye? Hope so. Great chapter! Update soon.

Light1396

Whoa, that was a very epic chapter. Loved it! Yayz, please update soon! Bye!

TD (who is clearly going insane...)

Man... You are too good at this! The Taiyu/Nianga moment was sad and sweet, loved it. I can imagine the battle scenes perfectly. Update asap, alright?

Light1396